天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and more natural expressions. Also, avoid listing weather types without linking them coherently.

示例: I live in Indonesia, a tropical country where the weather is usually sunny, but it can also be rainy or cloudy at times.

建议: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and avoiding awkward phrases like 'crying' for discomfort. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy feeling cozy under a blanket and wearing warm clothes like sweaters. In contrast, hot weather often makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and ensure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to contrast ideas effectively.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it is more practical and allows us to enjoy outdoor activities like hiking or playing sports. On the other hand, wet weather often requires extra preparation, which can be inconvenient.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I rarely check the weather forecast in my daily life because I usually drive and spend most of my time indoors. However, when I plan to ride my motorcycle or go out for a short trip, I always make sure to check the forecast.

建议: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct terms like 'climate change' and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your explanation clearer.

示例: I think climate change has significantly affected the weather recently. For example, the dry season, which usually lasts from April to September, has become much shorter, while the rainy season has become longer and more unpredictable.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to express your ideas more naturally.

示例: Yes, I would love to visit countries with snowy climates, such as those in Europe and the US, because I am curious to experience snowfall firsthand and try snow activities like skiing and building snowmen.

× In Indonesia, which a tropical country, there are several weather such as raining, cloudy and sunny.

✓ In Indonesia, which is a tropical country, there are several types of weather such as rain, clouds, and sunshine.

The phrase 'which a tropical country' is missing the verb 'is'. Also, 'several weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun; it should be 'several types of weather'. Additionally, 'raining' should be 'rain' as a noun, 'cloudy' should be 'clouds' to match the noun form, and 'sunny' should be 'sunshine' to be a noun.

× I prefer cold weather because I enjoy feeling cozy and warm by using my blanket and wearing my comfortable clothes such as sweater.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I enjoy feeling cozy and warm by using my blanket and wearing comfortable clothes such as sweaters.

The phrase 'my comfortable clothes such as sweater' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and 'sweater' is singular. It should be 'comfortable clothes such as sweaters' to maintain plural agreement.

× On the other hand, hot weather often makes me feel uncomfortable and crying.

✓ On the other hand, hot weather often makes me feel uncomfortable and cry.

The verb after 'makes me feel' should be in the base form, not the '-ing' form. 'Crying' is incorrect here; it should be 'cry'.

× I prefer dry weather because it's more practical and allow us to do outdoor activities such as hiking or playing outdoor sports.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's more practical and allows us to do outdoor activities such as hiking or playing outdoor sports.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to 'dry weather').

× In contrast, umm, what active wet weather usually require us to prepare more stuff?

✓ In contrast, active wet weather usually requires us to prepare more stuff.

The phrase 'what active wet weather' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'require' should be 'requires' to agree with the singular subject 'weather'. The sentence should be a statement, not a question.

× In my daily life, I rarely check the weather forecast because I usually drive my car and spend most of my activities in indoor areas.

✓ In my daily life, I rarely check the weather forecast because I usually drive my car and spend most of my time in indoor areas.

The phrase 'spend most of my activities' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend most of my time'. Also, 'in indoor areas' is acceptable but 'indoors' is more natural.

× However, when I ride my motorcycle or plan to go shortly, I make sure to check the forecast.

✓ However, when I ride my motorcycle or plan to go soon, I make sure to check the forecast.

The adverb 'shortly' is used incorrectly here; 'soon' is the correct adverb to indicate near future time.

× I think climate check has significantly affected the weather, especially in this year.

✓ I think climate change has significantly affected the weather, especially this year.

The phrase 'climate check' is incorrect; it should be 'climate change'. Also, 'in this year' is better expressed as 'this year'.

× For example, the dry season that usually held from April to September has much shorter, while the rainy season become longer and unpredictable.

✓ For example, the dry season that is usually held from April to September has become much shorter, while the rainy season has become longer and unpredictable.

The verb 'held' needs the auxiliary 'is' to form the passive voice 'is held'. 'Has much shorter' is incorrect; it should be 'has become much shorter'. Also, 'rainy season become' should be 'rainy season has become' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I would love to visit countries with snowy climates such as those in Europe and US because I really curious about experiencing snowfall in the first hand who also wanted to know the snow activities such as skiing and building snowmen.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit countries with snowy climates such as those in Europe and the US because I am really curious about experiencing snowfall firsthand and also want to know about snow activities such as skiing and building snowmen.

The phrase 'I really curious' is missing the verb 'am'. 'In the first hand' should be 'firsthand'. 'Who also wanted' is incorrect; it should be 'and also want'. 'US' should be preceded by 'the' as 'the US'.