天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question (describe current or typical weather), then add one brief reason. Avoid repetition and grammar errors: use complete sentences and correct word order.

示例: The weather where I live is usually warm and sunny. I prefer this kind of weather because I don't enjoy the cold.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Keep sentences short and correct verb forms and word order.

示例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy swimming and visiting water parks. For example, in summer my friends and I often go to the water park to cool off.

建议: Answer directly and explain with a concrete reason. Use correct grammar and avoid vague phrasing. Replace unclear fragments with specific descriptions of why you dislike wet weather.

示例: I prefer dry weather because rainy or humid conditions make me feel uncomfortable and my clothes often get damp.

建议: Structure the answer: say how often you check the forecast, when you check it, and what you do with the information. Use proper verb forms and smoother linking words (so, if). Remove filler sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'.

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out. If the forecast says it will rain, I bring an umbrella so I won't get wet.

建议: Don't hesitate — give a simple clear opinion and one or two specific effects. Use linking words to expand (for example, because, such as). Avoid fillers and repetition.

示例: Climate change has caused more extreme weather recently. For example, there have been stronger storms and longer heatwaves, which affect agriculture and people's health.

建议: Answer directly and explain with one clear reason. Use correct tense and articles, and avoid repeating phrases. Offer a brief contrast if helpful (e.g., sometimes I would, but currently I wouldn't).

示例: I wouldn't like to visit cities with very different climates right now because Korea already has four distinct seasons and I enjoy that variety. However, I might travel to different climates in the future to try new experiences.

× I like hot weather because I don't like cold.

✓ I like hot weather because I don't like the cold.

The adjective 'cold' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to cold weather in general. Use 'the cold' to mean cold conditions. Suggestion: say 'I don't like the cold.'

× Cold, so I like weather like summer.

✓ I prefer summer-like weather, so I like hot weather.

Original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. Recast into a complete sentence with subject and verb. Use 'summer-like' or 'weather like summer' after 'prefer' to be clear.

× I prefer hot weather because I like swim and water park so when hot weather like summer we open go to water park so I like hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I like swimming and going to water parks, so in hot weather like summer we often go to water parks.

Multiple issues: verbs after 'like' should be in -ing form ('swimming'), and nouns need plural or articles ('water parks'). 'We open go' is ungrammatical; use 'we often go'. Ensure consistent tense and correct verb forms.

× I prefer dry weather because if wet weather it likes, I don't like this feeling of wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like the feeling of wet weather.

Original has incorrect word order and extra words ('it likes'). Remove redundant clause and use correct preposition and noun phrase: 'the feeling of wet weather' or simply 'being wet'. Suggestion: 'I don't like being wet.'

× Yes, when I have uh time to meet my friend, I usually watching weather forecast umm and if if the forecast say rain, I bring my umbrella.

✓ Yes, when I have time to meet my friend, I usually watch the weather forecast, and if the forecast says it will rain, I bring my umbrella.

After 'usually' use base verb 'watch' not 'watching'. 'Forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. For reported forecast use present tense 'says' and add 'it will rain' or 'rain' for clarity. Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'the forecast says'. Also remove filler words.

× MMM, this question is very difficult, but climate change, I think climate change. Umm.

✓ This question is very difficult, but I think climate change is important or I think about climate change a lot.

Original is repetitive and lacks a clear predicate. Provide a complete clause expressing the intended idea, for example 'I think climate change is very important' or 'I think about climate change.' Avoid repetition and include a verb.

× Now I don't like because in Korea we have Four Seasons, so we experience Four Seasons like hot weather or cold weather. So I don't want another cities.

✓ Right now I don't want to because in Korea we have four seasons, so we experience hot and cold weather. So I don't want to move to other cities.

Use articles and count nouns correctly: 'four seasons' should be lowercase and without 'Four Seasons' unless a proper noun. 'Another cities' is incorrect; use 'other cities' or 'another city'. Clarify meaning: likely 'I don't want to move to other cities.' Also adjust tense and verb for clarity.