天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence describing current weather, avoid filler words (uh, umm), and keep supporting details concise and specific (temperature, season, typical conditions). Use linking words if adding details.

示例: At the moment it’s mild and mostly sunny where I live. In summer temperatures usually reach around 25°C, but evenings are cool, so we often have light breezes and clear skies.

建议: Start with a clear preference statement, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, for example). Avoid asking questions back to the examiner and reduce hesitations.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing layers and warm clothing. For example, I like wearing coats and scarves, and I find cooler air more comfortable for outdoor activities.

建议: Answer directly with a topic sentence and give specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Explain practicality or personal comfort and avoid repetition and fillers.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it’s easier to travel and do activities outdoors. For instance, I can walk or ride a bike without worrying about rain or muddy roads.

建议: Respond with frequency (always, sometimes, rarely) and give clear examples of when/how you check forecasts. Use linking words to connect reasons and avoid repetition.

示例: I check the weather forecast sometimes, especially before I travel or plan outdoor activities. For example, I usually look at a weather app in the morning and again before I leave the house if I have a long trip planned.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence about observed effects, then provide specific examples (flooding, temperature changes, crop impacts) and link them logically. Avoid vague statements and correct grammar issues.

示例: I think climate change has increased the frequency of extreme weather where we live, such as heavier rains and occasional floods. For example, higher rainfall in recent years has caused river levels to rise, which affects farming and local livelihoods.

建议: Give a direct yes/no preference, then explain with specific reasons and use linking words (because, so that) to make your answer coherent. Mention an example of a climate you’d like to experience.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new landscapes and weather. For instance, I would love to visit a dry desert region to see the unique scenery and contrast it with my home’s riverine environment.

× Well, uh, when I going another place or I, uh, travel in the, uh, another place in this time, I wish the weather is too good, like, umm, summary types or, and not too much hot, but also, uh, some cool cool.

✓ Well, when I go to another place or travel at this time, I hope the weather is very good, like summery, not too hot, but also somewhat cool.

The student uses 'going' where the simple present 'go' or infinitive 'to go' is required (present tense form). 'I wish the weather is too good' is incorrect: use 'I hope the weather is very good' and avoid 'too' before a positive adjective. 'Summary types' is a wrong word choice; use 'summery'. Suggestions: use correct present tense verb forms (I go/I travel), replace 'wish' with 'hope' for present situations, and use appropriate adjectives like 'summery'.

× Always I prefer cold weather because in this time you wear many types of clothes.

✓ I always prefer cold weather because at that time you can wear many kinds of clothes.

Word order and verb usage are incorrect. 'Always I prefer' should be 'I always prefer.' 'In this time' is unnatural; use 'at that time' or 'during that season.' 'Many types of clothes' is better as 'many kinds of clothes.' Suggestions: place adverbs correctly (I always...), use natural time expressions, and choose 'kinds' for varieties.

× Who, umm, what types you like.

✓ Which types of clothes do you like?

This fragment lacks proper question structure and auxiliary verb 'do.' It should be a complete wh-question: 'Which types... do you like?' Suggestions: use 'which' for choices, include 'do' for present simple questions, and specify the noun ('clothes').

× So it's very, umm, uh, it's very fantastic.

✓ So it's really fantastic.

Redundant repetition and filler words make the sentence awkward. Use a single clause: 'So it's really fantastic.' Suggestions: avoid repeating 'it's' and reduce fillers for clarity.

× I prefer the cold.

✓ I prefer the cold weather.

Saying 'I prefer the cold' is possible but sounds informal; adding 'weather' clarifies the noun. The definite article 'the' is acceptable when referencing a general weather type; prefer full noun for clarity.

× I prefer a dry weather because it's the time, uh, you going anywhere or you just feel the weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's a time when you can go anywhere or just enjoy the weather.

Use of the indefinite article 'a' before uncountable 'weather' is incorrect. Also 'it's the time, you going' lacks structure: use 'it's a time when you can...' Suggestions: remove article before 'weather', add 'when' and auxiliary 'can' for ability, and use 'enjoy' instead of 'feel' for natural phrasing.

× So I always prefer to dry weather because of this, uh, nature.

✓ So I always prefer dry weather because of this nature.

Incorrect infinitive 'to dry weather' should be omitted; 'prefer' is followed directly by noun or gerund. Also article 'the' was previously incorrect. Suggestions: say 'prefer dry weather' and ensure noun phrase 'this nature' may be better as 'the natural conditions' if needed.

× Actually, when I going anywhere in this time, I check the habit of habit of checking weather because it's very helpful for me to going outside.

✓ Actually, when I go anywhere at that time, I check the weather because it is very helpful for me when going outside.

Uses 'going' where simple present 'go' is needed and repeats 'habit of.' 'Check the habit of checking weather' is redundant and ungrammatical. Also 'to going' should be 'when going' or 'to go outside.' Suggestions: use 'go' for present simple, remove redundancies, and use correct conjunctions and prepositions ('at that time', 'check the weather', 'when going outside').

× So, umm, not too much, but sometimes I, uh, going anywhere, so I check it.

✓ So, not very often, but sometimes I go somewhere, so I check it.

Uses 'going' where 'go' is required in present simple. 'Not too much' is vague; 'not very often' is clearer. Suggestions: use base form 'go' for habitual actions and use clearer frequency adverbs.

× Actually, uh, we are live in the river, uh, rivers country.

✓ Actually, we live in a river country.

'Are live' is incorrect present tense; use 'live.' Also 'rivers country' is awkward — use 'a river country' or better 'a region of rivers' or 'a riverine area.' Suggestions: use correct present simple 'we live' and choose a natural noun phrase.

× So it's totally depend on our uh, weather.

✓ So it totally depends on our weather.

'Depend' needs third person singular agreement 'depends' to match 'it.' This is a subject-verb agreement/verb form issue. Suggestions: use 'depends' for 'it' and avoid filler words.

× So I think, umm, not, uh, in our climate, it's not way too much change because it's already the river.

✓ So I think our climate has not changed that much because we are already a riverine area.

Sentence mixes tenses and unnatural phrases. 'It's not way too much change' should be 'has not changed that much' (present perfect to show change up to now). 'It's already the river' is unclear; use 'we are a riverine area' or 'we are already dependent on rivers.' Suggestions: use present perfect for changes over time and choose clear nouns.

× Uh, I would like to visit the difference country or the climate from anywhere.

✓ I would like to visit a different country or a place with a different climate.

'Difference country' is wrong adjective form; use 'different.' Also 'the climate from anywhere' is unclear. Use 'a place with a different climate.' Suggestions: use adjective 'different' and restructure the phrase to 'a place with a different climate.'

× I just see the weather and I checked the nature and also climate.

✓ I would just like to see the weather, observe the nature, and learn about the climate.

Mixed tenses ('see' and 'checked'), unclear verbs. Use consistent tense and parallel structure: 'see', 'observe', 'learn.' Suggestions: maintain parallel verbs and consistent tense matching the conditional 'would like' earlier.

× So it's very helpful for me to knowing the, uh, climates in.

✓ So it's very helpful for me to know about the climates there.

'To knowing' is incorrect; after 'to' use the base form 'know.' 'Climates in' is incomplete; add 'there' or the place. Suggestions: use infinitive 'to know' and complete prepositional phrase 'climates there'.