天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear comparisons. Also correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, word order).

示例: It is usually very cold where I live, and we often get a lot of snow. However, I enjoy the wet weather because the rain makes the air feel fresh and lifts my mood.

建议: Answer directly with a clear reason and one supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and avoid repeating phrases. Correct sentence structure and verb forms.

示例: I prefer hot weather because I can wear light, comfortable clothes and spend more time outdoors. In cold weather I have to wear many layers, which I find restrictive.

建议: Be clear about the preference and give specific, relevant reasons. Avoid unrelated or confusing statements ('vendor', 'bed'). Use linking words and orderly listing of reasons.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to stay clean and comfortable. In wet weather my clothes and shoes often get muddy, and I don’t like dealing with dampness indoors.

建议: Give a direct answer about frequency and purpose; use correct time expressions and complete sentences. Mention specific methods (apps, websites, TV) and a clear reason for checking forecasts.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going to work, usually on my phone app. I do this to decide whether to take public transport or drive, and to choose suitable clothing.

建议: Provide a focused opinion with concrete, accurate examples of climate change effects (temperature, extreme weather, sea levels). Avoid vague or irrelevant comments like 'noise'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather recently, such as stronger storms and longer heatwaves. For example, summers are hotter and we sometimes see heavier rainfall and flooding in my region.

建议: Answer directly and give specific examples of places and reasons. Use correct place names and clear comparisons. Keep it concise and organized with linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new environments. For example, I might visit a hot, sunny city in my home country to enjoy the warmth, and a dry, sunny city to try outdoor activities I can’t do in rainy Vancouver.

× The weather like where I am live is extremely cold for many days like snow is most of the times as compared to hot weather rainy spring.

✓ The weather where I live has been extremely cold for many days, with snow most of the time compared to hot or rainy spring weather.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and redundant phrases. Use 'where I live' after 'weather' and present perfect 'has been' for a condition continuing up to now. Replace 'like snow is most of the times' with 'with snow most of the time' and streamline the comparison to 'compared to hot or rainy spring weather'. Suggestion: Place time expressions correctly and remove repetition.'

× But I like the wet weather because it makes me feel good.

✓ However, I like wet weather because it makes me feel good.

Beginning a sentence with 'But' is informal; 'However' is more appropriate in spoken answers. Also 'the wet weather' is unnatural here; use 'wet weather' without the definite article when speaking generally.'

× I prefer hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather.

This sentence is acceptable. No grammatical correction needed. Keep concise because it directly answers the question.

× In hot weather I usually wear good looking dress as compared to in hot weather.

✓ In hot weather I usually wear good-looking clothes.

Use the compound adjective 'good-looking' with a hyphen and plural 'clothes' rather than 'dress' if referring generally. Remove the repeated phrase 'as compared to in hot weather', which is redundant.'

× I want.

✓ I prefer it.

The fragment 'I want.' is incomplete and unclear. Use 'I prefer it.' to express preference clearly, matching the prior context.'

× In cold weather I want to so many clothes to protect from the cold.

✓ In cold weather I want to wear many clothes to protect myself from the cold.

The original lacks the verb 'wear' and misuses 'to' and reflexive pronoun. Use 'wear many clothes' and 'protect myself from the cold'. This fixes verb omission and pronoun use.'

× I prefer dry vendor as compared to wet weather because in dry weather we drink lots of water as compared to wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather compared to wet weather because in dry weather we drink a lot of water.

'Vendor' is incorrect; use 'weather'. Replace repetitive 'as compared to wet weather' with a single comparison. Use 'a lot of water' rather than 'lots of water' for clarity.'

× Wet weather makes our clothes dirty, shoes dirty and our house then our house also become dirty due to bed.

✓ Wet weather makes our clothes and shoes dirty, and our house also becomes dirty because of mud.

Fix list parallelism ('clothes and shoes') and correct verb agreement 'becomes'. 'Then our house' is redundant; replace with 'and'. 'Due to bed' is incorrect; likely meant 'mud'. Ensure cause is clearly stated.'

× Yes, I have it too.

✓ Yes, I do.

'I have it too' is vague. In response to 'Are you in the habit...', use 'Yes, I do' to confirm the habit. This corrects pronoun/reference confusion.'

× I have the habit of checking weather forecast when I usually go to the work.

✓ I have a habit of checking the weather forecast when I usually go to work.

Add the article 'a' before 'habit', include the definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast', and remove 'the' before 'work'. Maintain natural word order.'

× I often use daily basis whether that the weather is good outside to travel with the public transport or with the car.

✓ I often check the weather on a daily basis to see if it is good outside for traveling by public transport or by car.

Original has wrong word order and incorrect words ('use daily basis', 'whether that'). Use 'check the weather on a daily basis' and 'to see if it is good outside for traveling by public transport or by car'. This clarifies purpose and corrects adverb placement.'

× If there is a good weather then I.

✓ If the weather is good, I go by public transport or drive.

Original is an incomplete sentence. Use 'If the weather is good, I...' and complete the thought (e.g., 'I go by public transport or drive'). Also remove 'a' before 'good weather' because 'weather' is uncountable here.'

× Yes, I think, yes, I think so many facts change in recent years.

✓ Yes, I think many things have changed in recent years.

'So many facts change' is unnatural. Use 'many things have changed' and present perfect 'have changed' for changes that occurred up to now. Remove repeated 'yes, I think'.'

× In the climate, for example, nowadays there is no less noise compared to previous year.

✓ For example, the climate has changed; nowadays there is more noise compared to previous years.

'In the climate' is awkward; restructure to 'the climate has changed'. 'No less noise' is confusing; likely intended 'more noise'. Use 'previous years' (plural) or 'the previous year' and correct comparative structure.'

× Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have different climate from my city from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have a different climate from the city where I live.

Use 'a different climate' and correct word order: 'from the city where I live'. Remove redundant 'from' placements.'

× I live in Richmond.

✓ I live in Richmond.

This sentence is correct. 'In Richmond' is correct preposition usage. No change needed.'

× In Vancouver there is a gold as well as rainy climate and in my home country there is a hot climate.

✓ Vancouver has a mild, rainy climate, and my home country has a hot climate.

'Gold' is incorrect; likely 'mild'. Use 'Vancouver has a mild, rainy climate' for natural adjective order and parallel structure with 'my home country has a hot climate'.