零食— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structure and tenses. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'snacks' unnecessarily. For example, say 'I usually eat snacks in the evening or when I feel hungry in the morning.'

示例: I usually eat snacks in the evening or whenever I feel hungry in the morning.

建议: Improve your answer by using linking words to connect ideas and by making your sentences clearer and more natural. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague phrases like 'eat anything.'

示例: Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy for me because I exercise regularly; I go to the gym in the morning and run in the evening, so I maintain my body well and can afford to eat snacks.

建议: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your answer more coherent and relevant. Use clear sentences with proper grammar and provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because my friends and I believed that eating snacks made us happy and energetic.

建议: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Also, avoid vague terms like 'etcetera' and try to give specific examples. Use linking words if you mention multiple items.

示例: I usually like to eat sandwiches made with paneer and onions. Sometimes, I also enjoy French fries and other fast foods like samosas.

× I usually do it snacks in the evening or when I was hungry at the morning time then I eat snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening or when I am hungry in the morning.

The phrase 'do it snacks' is incorrect; 'eat' is the correct verb here. Also, 'when I was hungry at the morning time' should be 'when I am hungry in the morning' to maintain present tense consistency and correct preposition use.

× Yes, it is healthy for me to eat snacks because in morning I go to gym and evening I go for running and I maintain my body in a good way so that I can eat anything.

✓ Yes, it is healthy for me to eat snacks because in the morning I go to the gym and in the evening I go running, and I maintain my body in a good way so that I can eat anything.

The prepositions 'in morning' and 'go to gym' are incorrect; they should be 'in the morning' and 'go to the gym'. Also, 'go for running' should be 'go running' for natural English usage.

× Yes, I think that, uh, when I was a child, uh, I eat uh, snacks, uh, because, uh, we see that uh, around us children say that are young and they eat snacks for their life to be happy and.

✓ Yes, I think that when I was a child, I ate snacks because we saw that children around us were young and they ate snacks to be happy.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame. Also, 'we see' should be 'we saw' and 'children say that are young' is incorrect; it should be 'children were young'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× I usually eat sandwiches that is made-up of paneer and onions and sometime I eat French fries and some fast food etcetera.

✓ I usually eat sandwiches that are made of paneer and onions, and sometimes I eat French fries and some fast food, etcetera.

The subject 'sandwiches' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'made-up of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'made of'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.