零食— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa eigo no shizen na tsukaikata ni shite, 'uh' nado no filler o sakan ni shite kudasai. Mata, 'snack' wa fukusuukei no toki wa 'snacks' to shiyou shite kudasai. Kotae wa 3-5 bunshou de shouryaku shite, jikan o muda ni shinai you ni shite kudasai.

示例: I usually eat snacks when I feel very hungry, but nowadays I prefer to have some snacks while watching movies at home and relaxing.

建议: Kotae no imi ga wakari nikui node, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. 'Failed' no you na kotoba wa fukuyou shinaide, wakariyasui tango o tsukatte kudasai. Mata, riron o teiji suru toki wa, riyuu to jissai no jirei o tsukete setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because homemade food is better for our health. However, if we eat snacks in small amounts, it is acceptable.

建议: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, bunpou no machigai mo arimasu. 'All statin noodles' wa imi ga fukakai desu. Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, jikan wa 3-5 bunshou ni shiyou. Kako no habit to genzai no chigai o meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: When I was young, I often ate instant noodles as snacks because I liked their taste. But now, I have changed this habit because I care more about my health.

建议: Kotae wa fukuzatsu de, bunpou no machigai ga arimasu. 'Eastern noodles' wa motto meikaku ni shite, riyuu to jikan o setsumei shite kudasai. Kotae wa 3-5 bunshou de shouryaku shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

示例: My favorite snack is instant noodles because I enjoy their sour and salty flavor. I usually eat them when I want something quick and comforting, especially in the evening.

× Well, if I feel very hungry, I'll often buy snack and have it instantly.

✓ Well, if I feel very hungry, I'll often buy snacks and have them instantly.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to an unspecified quantity of food items. Also, the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'snacks'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× But nowadays, uh, I prefer to have some snacks while watching movies on TV and just relaxing at home.

✓ But nowadays, uh, I prefer to have some snacks while watching movies on TV and just relaxing at home.

This sentence is correct in terms of singular and plural usage; no correction needed.

× To be honest, in terms of failed, I believe that having homemade food is mandatory for health well-being, but uh, we can't stop ourselves from eating snacks, so having eating very less quantity is not that.

✓ To be honest, in terms of health, I believe that having homemade food is mandatory for well-being, but uh, we can't stop ourselves from eating snacks, so eating them in very small quantities is acceptable.

The phrase 'in terms of failed' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'in terms of health'. The phrase 'having eating very less quantity' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'eating them in very small quantities'. This involves incorrect use of quantifiers and sentence structure errors.

× Yeah. Typically in a typical day I will always have all statin noodles when I was very young.

✓ Yeah. Typically, on a typical day, I would always have instant noodles when I was very young.

The phrase 'will always have' is incorrect when referring to past habitual actions; it should be 'would always have'. Also, 'all statin noodles' seems to be a mishearing of 'instant noodles'. This is a past tense issue.

× But now this habit has been changed already as I have been very concerned about my health well-being here at that time.

✓ But now this habit has already changed as I have become very concerned about my health and well-being.

The phrase 'has been changed' is passive and awkward here; 'has changed' is more natural. Also, 'here at that time' is contradictory; 'now' and 'at that time' conflict. This is a tense and sentence structure issue.

× I often buy snack because I like that it's a noodle taste.

✓ I often buy snacks because I like their noodle taste.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to indicate general items. 'It's a noodle taste' is awkward; 'their noodle taste' is better. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect use of pronouns.

× When my favorite snack is Eastern noodles because I enjoy their sour and salty flavor, I have to eat them when I want something quick and comforting, especially in the evening or in the daytime.

✓ My favorite snack is Eastern noodles because I enjoy their sour and salty flavor. I eat them when I want something quick and comforting, especially in the evening or during the day.

The original sentence is a run-on and awkward. 'When my favorite snack is' is incorrect; it should be 'My favorite snack is'. Also, 'in the daytime' is better as 'during the day'. This is a sentence structure and preposition issue.

× That is taste it's easy for.

✓ They have a taste that is easy to enjoy.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence.