零食— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
When do you usually eat snacks now?
考生
I have usually eaten snack at the time I feel exhausted and furtive after a long day. I usually eat some fruit, sweet chocolate. They are very delicious and they can help me to win and recharge my battery. Especially it can leave my mood, I feel better after.
考官
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
考生
Yes, eating snacks very beneficial if we eat them in moderation and we follow a suitable schedule. However, we have to choose the right kinds such as nut or fruit. They are very nutritious and healthy. It can help us to gain energy.
考官
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
考生
Yes I did. When I was young I ate a lot of snacks because I was truly a sweet tooth. I usually enjoy chocolate candies, sweet food and something I felt it very delicious. I think eating snack was one of my hobbies.
考官
What snacks do you like to eat?
考生
I am quite an easy eater so I usually eat some snack if they are delicious and have a good sense. I usually enjoy chocolate, candy, fruit like dragon fruit, orange. I extremely like fruit because they provide me a lot of nutrients. This is very wholesome.
评估
总分
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
分数: 65.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "furtive" và câu nên ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thời điểm và lý do bạn ăn vặt.
示例: I usually eat snacks when I feel tired after a long day. For example, I often have some fruit or chocolate because they taste good and help me feel refreshed and improve my mood.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
分数: 75.0建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn về các loại đồ ăn vặt lành mạnh.
示例: Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if we eat them in moderation and at the right times. For instance, nuts and fruits are nutritious snacks that provide energy and important vitamins.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
分数: 70.0建议: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ một cách chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về loại đồ ăn vặt bạn thích khi còn nhỏ.
示例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I had a sweet tooth. I usually enjoyed chocolate candies and other sweet treats because they tasted delicious. Eating snacks was one of my favorite hobbies.
What snacks do you like to eat?
分数: 68.0建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "have a good sense". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích các loại đồ ăn vặt đó.
示例: I am not very picky, so I usually eat snacks that taste good. I enjoy chocolate, candy, and fruits like dragon fruit and oranges. I especially like fruits because they are nutritious and healthy.
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