零食— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it's ate very lots of snacks". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I used to eat a lot of snacks in the past, but now I don't eat them very often. Usually, I have snacks only on weekends.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "Thing snacks" và "contains". Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung có liên kết logic. Hãy sử dụng từ nối như "however" một cách chính xác.

示例: I don't think snacks are very healthy because most of them are junk food containing a lot of sugar and fat. However, I sometimes eat them occasionally when I feel hungry between meals, so it's better not to eat snacks too often to stay healthy.

建议: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết như "Very, very, very a lot". Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, đồng thời sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, when I was young, I needed to eat snacks quite often. I usually ate them every afternoon when I was hungry, and also before playing badminton or football.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn về sở thích của mình. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung có liên kết logic, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

示例: I like many kinds of snacks, but my favorites are biscuits and chips like Doritos or Lays. I especially enjoy onion-flavored snacks with cream.

× Actually in the past it's ate very lots of snacks, but now I eat snacks.

✓ Actually in the past I ate a lot of snacks, but now I eat snacks.

The verb 'ate' is the past tense of 'eat' and should be used with the subject 'I' instead of 'it's'. Also, 'very lots of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a lot of'.

× I don't think it's Thing snacks is very healthy because most snacks are junk food and contains a lot of sugars or fat.

✓ I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because most snacks are junk food and contain a lot of sugar or fat.

'Thing snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'eating snacks'. Also, 'contains' should be 'contain' to agree with the plural subject 'snacks'. 'Sugars' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'sugar' is preferred.

× However, I sometimes eat them occasionally when I feel hungry between meals, so it's better not to eat snakes so often to stay healthy.

✓ However, I sometimes eat them occasionally when I feel hungry between meals, so it's better not to eat snacks so often to stay healthy.

The word 'snakes' is a typo and should be 'snacks'.

× Yes, of course, when I was young, I need snacks Very, very, very a lot.

✓ Yes, of course, when I was young, I needed snacks very, very, very much.

The verb 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match 'when I was young'. Also, 'a lot' should be 'much' when used with uncountable nouns like 'snacks' in this context.

× Uh, I eat, eat when I hungry in every afternoon and I eat before I go to play badminton or play football.

✓ Uh, I ate snacks when I was hungry every afternoon, and I ate before I went to play badminton or football.

The sentence needs past tense verbs 'ate' and 'was hungry' to match the past time frame. Also, 'in every afternoon' should be 'every afternoon'. The phrase 'go to play' is simplified to 'went to play'.

× Oh a lot of snack I like to eat but the most I think is biscuits or Doritos, uh lays.

✓ Oh, I like to eat a lot of snacks, but the most I think are biscuits or Doritos, uh, Lays.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' after 'a lot of'. Also, 'the most' refers to plural 'biscuits or Doritos', so the verb should be 'are'. 'Lays' is a brand name and should be capitalized.

× And the best is onions. Snacks is the best.

✓ And the best is onions. Snacks are the best.

'Snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I like it especially with cream.

✓ I like it especially with cream.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.