耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'things are not going according to me' and instead say 'things don't go my way'. Also, try to add a linking phrase to explain why you feel that way.

示例: No, I'm not a very patient person because I easily get frustrated when things don't go my way, especially if I have to wait or deal with delays.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct singular/plural forms and be more specific. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Waiting in a long, unorganized queue makes me impatient, especially when people ignore the staff's instructions, which causes unnecessary delays.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I usually feel frustrated when I have to do a task for a long time, especially if I haven't done it recently. This makes me a bit angry and impatient because I struggle to focus.

建议: Your answer is honest but could be more structured and natural. Avoid phrases like 'The thing is that' and use linking words to explain your point clearly.

示例: Yes, my job requires patience, and I try not to get frustrated easily. However, sometimes I lose my focus and rhythm when things don't go as planned.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and is confusing. Use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas. Try to link your childhood behaviour to your current patience level logically.

示例: When I was a child, I was very hyperactive and easily frustrated. As a result, I still struggle with anger issues now, so I am not much more patient than before.

× One of the thing that makes me feel impatient is waiting in a long queue when it's unorganized and everyone is not listening to the owner and the thing.

✓ One of the things that makes me feel impatient is waiting in a long queue when it's unorganized and everyone is not listening to the owner and the thing.

The phrase 'One of the thing' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things'.

× It will makes me a little bit angry and impatient also.

✓ It will make me a little bit angry and impatient also.

After the modal verb 'will', the base form of the verb should be used. 'Makes' is incorrect here; it should be 'make'.

× I can't control on myself and I easily get frustrated and I lose my rhythm and focus.

✓ I can't control myself and I easily get frustrated and I lose my rhythm and focus.

The verb 'control' does not require the preposition 'on' when used with a direct object like 'myself'. The correct form is 'control myself'.

× When I was a kid, I am a very hyperactive student so I easily get frustrated from my childhood so that's why I got my more anger issues now when I'm young.

✓ When I was a kid, I was a very hyperactive student so I easily got frustrated from my childhood; that's why I have more anger issues now that I'm young.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I am' should be 'I was' to match the past time frame. 'I got my more anger issues' is awkward; 'I have more anger issues now' is correct. Also, 'when I'm young' should be 'now that I'm young' or 'now that I am older' for clarity.