耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh'. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in difficult situations. For example, when I face challenges at work, I take my time to find solutions without getting frustrated.

建议: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Avoid unrelated or unclear details. Use complete sentences and explain your feelings or reasons for impatience with relevant examples.

示例: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long lines because I get bored and want to do other things. For instance, waiting at the bank can make me restless.

建议: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating the same words. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I usually feel tired when I have to work on a task for a long time because my concentration decreases. Therefore, I try to take short breaks to stay focused.

建议: Avoid repeating words and use proper verb forms. Give a clear answer and explain why patience is important in your job with specific details.

示例: Yes, my job as a real estate agent requires a lot of patience because I often have to wait for clients to make decisions and handle complex negotiations.

建议: Use correct verb tenses and plural forms. Provide a clear comparison and explain why patience improves with age using specific reasons.

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as I have grown older, I have learned to control my emotions and understand situations better.

× I can clearly say that I am patient person because sometimes I am patient, sometimes not so bad.

✓ I can clearly say that I am a patient person because sometimes I am patient, sometimes not so bad.

The noun 'person' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× Patient are skilled that you have to, uh, have to achieve, uh, the things what you want in life.

✓ Patience is a skill that you have to, uh, achieve, uh, the things that you want in life.

'Patient' is an adjective; the correct noun form here is 'patience' which is uncountable and singular. Also, 'are' should be 'is' to agree with the singular noun 'patience'. 'What' should be 'that' as a relative pronoun referring to 'things'.

× I feel exhausted when I have to do some kind of things for a long time because I have no patient to do thing for a long time and sometimes I quit because I have not patient and I need to improve it.

✓ I feel exhausted when I have to do some kinds of things for a long time because I have no patience to do things for a long time and sometimes I quit because I have no patience and I need to improve it.

'Some kind of things' should be 'some kinds of things' to match plural 'things'. 'Patient' is incorrect; the noun 'patience' is needed. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'Have not patient' should be 'have no patience'.

× Yes, yes, my job require me to be patient because I'm a real estate agent and it is very difficult job to do and it needs some patience to do your job.

✓ Yes, yes, my job requires me to be patient because I'm a real estate agent and it is a very difficult job to do and it needs some patience to do your job.

The singular subject 'job' requires the verb 'requires' with an 's' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'very difficult job' needs the article 'a' before 'very difficult job'.

× Yes, I am more patient now than when I were a child because in general children don't have patient and when you get older your patients are much more good qualities than you.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because in general children don't have patience and when you get older your patience is a much better quality than yours.

The past tense of 'to be' for singular first person is 'was', not 'were'. 'Patient' should be 'patience' as a noun. 'Patients' is incorrect; it should be 'patience'. 'Much more good qualities' is incorrect; it should be 'a much better quality'. 'Than you' should be 'than yours' to compare qualities.