耐心— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
Well, I consider myself as a patient person because I can't wait other people when they are busy to like to do something with me and I think that it is a vital morale.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
Well, I think that's the main reasons for making me feel impatient is when I have to wait for other people for a long time. I know that I must be patient, however, too long is unnecessary.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
Well, it depends on the activities. Sometimes, especially when I have to study for a long time, I feel frustrated and exhausted. However, when I do some fun activities, I feel interested.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Well I'm currently a high school student so my study requires me a lot of patience, especially when I search for the Internet about how to do any assignments.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I think so. When I was a child, I didn't understand how to be patient. However, now I am touched about the importance of patient. So I think that now I am more patient now.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分数: 60.0建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I can't wait other people", bạn nên nói "I can wait for other people". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh dài dòng và tập trung vào ý chính.
示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can wait calmly when others are busy, and I believe patience is an important quality.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分数: 70.0建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "that's the main reasons" (phải là "reason"). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như "because" hoặc "so".
示例: I feel impatient mainly when I have to wait for other people for a long time because I think waiting too long is unnecessary.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分数: 80.0建议: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn có thể thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để mô tả cảm xúc. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
示例: It depends on the activity. For example, when I study for a long time, I often feel frustrated and exhausted, but if I do something enjoyable, I stay interested and motivated.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分数: 75.0建议: Bạn nên nói rõ hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "requires me a lot of patience" nên là "requires a lot of patience from me". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn.
示例: I'm currently a high school student, so my studies require a lot of patience, especially when I search the Internet to find out how to complete assignments.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分数: 65.0建议: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đúng tính từ "patient" thay vì "patient" (danh từ). Câu trả lời nên tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì "I am touched about the importance of patient", bạn có thể nói "I now understand the importance of being patient".
示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I now understand the importance of being patient in daily life.
语法
× I consider myself as a patient person because I can't wait other people when they are busy to like to do something with me and I think that it is a vital morale.
✓ I consider myself a patient person because I can't wait for other people when they are busy to do something with me and I think that it is a vital morale.
The phrase 'consider myself as' is incorrect; it should be 'consider myself' without 'as'. Also, 'can't wait other people' is missing the preposition 'for' after 'wait'. The phrase 'to like to do something with me' is awkward and unclear; it should be 'to do something with me'. These preposition errors affect the clarity and correctness of the sentence.
× Well, I think that's the main reasons for making me feel impatient is when I have to wait for other people for a long time.
✓ Well, I think the main reason that makes me feel impatient is when I have to wait for other people for a long time.
The phrase 'that's the main reasons' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'That's' (that is) should be followed by a singular noun 'reason' not plural 'reasons'. Also, 'for making me feel impatient' is awkward; 'that makes me feel impatient' is more natural and grammatically correct.
× However, when I do some fun activities, I feel interested.
✓ However, when I do some fun activities, I feel interested in them.
The adjective 'interested' requires a preposition 'in' to indicate what the interest is directed towards. Without 'in', the sentence is incomplete and unclear.
× Well I'm currently a high school student so my study requires me a lot of patience, especially when I search for the Internet about how to do any assignments.
✓ Well, I'm currently a high school student so my studies require me to have a lot of patience, especially when I search the Internet about how to do assignments.
The phrase 'search for the Internet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'search the Internet'. Also, 'my study requires me a lot of patience' should be 'my studies require me to have a lot of patience' to be grammatically correct and natural.
× However, now I am touched about the importance of patient.
✓ However, now I am touched by the importance of patience.
The phrase 'touched about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'touched by'. Also, 'importance of patient' is incorrect because 'patient' is an adjective; the noun form 'patience' should be used here.
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