耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác, ví dụ như 'person patient person' nên là 'a patient person'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: No, I am not a patient person because I feel it wastes my time. For example, if I have to wait for someone for too long, I usually decide to leave.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ như 'believable time' không phù hợp, nên dùng 'valuable time'. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi từ vựng không chính xác.

示例: Several things make me feel impatient, especially when I have a tight schedule. For instance, standing in line at the bank or supermarket is frustrating because it wastes my valuable time.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ 'I feel not frustrating' nên là 'I don't feel frustrated'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp.

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I don't feel frustrated because it's my job and I have to complete it.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít trong câu, ví dụ 'My job require' nên là 'My job requires'. Câu trả lời hơi dài và lặp từ 'time' và 'patience'. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

示例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I need to complete tasks that take a long time and demand responsibility.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ 'than I was at a strike' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng thì quá khứ và hiện tại hoàn thành, cũng như cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get frustrated easily when things didn't go my way, but over time, I have learned to stay calm and think things through.

× No, actually I'm not a person patient person because it makes me waste time for useless things.

✓ No, actually I'm not a patient person because it makes me waste time on useless things.

The adjective 'patient' should come before the noun 'person' to form the correct phrase 'patient person'. Also, the preposition 'for' is incorrect here; it should be 'on' when referring to wasting time on something.

× For example, when wait for people too long, I decided to not to wait more.

✓ For example, when I wait for people too long, I decide not to wait any longer.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'wait'. Also, 'decided' should be in present tense 'decide' to match the habitual action. The phrase 'not to wait more' is incorrect; it should be 'not to wait any longer'.

× There are several things that make me feel impatient, especially when I have a time schedule.

✓ There are several things that make me feel impatient, especially when I have a tight schedule.

The phrase 'a time schedule' is unnatural; 'a tight schedule' or 'a busy schedule' is more appropriate to express limited time.

× For example, standing in line at the bank or supermarket can be quite frustrating because it feels like a waste of believable time.

✓ For example, standing in line at the bank or supermarket can be quite frustrating because it feels like a waste of valuable time.

The word 'believable' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'valuable' to describe time that is important or worth saving.

× When I have to do something for a long time, I feel not frustrating because it's my work and I have to do it.

✓ When I have to do something for a long time, I do not feel frustrated because it's my work and I have to do it.

The adjective 'frustrating' describes something that causes frustration, but here the speaker wants to express their feeling, so 'frustrated' (past participle used as adjective) is correct. Also, 'feel not frustrating' is incorrect; it should be 'do not feel frustrated'.

× My job require me to be patient because I have to complete my work for a long time and it really takes time and needs responsibility and patience.

✓ My job requires me to be patient because I have to complete my work over a long time and it really takes time and requires responsibility and patience.

The subject 'My job' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires' not 'require'. Also, 'needs responsibility and patience' is better expressed as 'requires responsibility and patience' to maintain parallel structure.

× Yes, I believe I'm more patient now than I was at a strike.

✓ Yes, I believe I'm more patient now than I was as a child.

The phrase 'at a strike' is incorrect and does not make sense in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'as a child' to compare past and present patience.

× Growing up I used to get frustrated easily when didn't when things didn't go my way.

✓ Growing up, I used to get frustrated easily when things didn't go my way.

The phrase 'when didn't when things didn't go my way' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'when didn't' corrects the sentence.

× But with the time and experience I have learned to stay calm and things through.

✓ But with time and experience, I have learned to stay calm and think things through.

The phrase 'things through' is incomplete; the correct expression is 'think things through'. Also, 'the time' should be 'time' without 'the' in this context.