耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が質問に直接答えておらず、内容が混乱しています。質問は「あなたは忍耐強い人ですか？」ですが、答えは病気や怪我に関する話に逸れています。質問に対して明確に答え、関連する具体例を簡潔に述べることが重要です。

示例: No, I am not a very patient person. For example, I often get frustrated when I have to wait for a long time, such as in queues or traffic jams.

建议: 文法ミスや冗長な表現があり、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「wait for a long hour hour」は不自然で、「complex to」の意味も不明瞭です。より正確な文法と語彙を使い、具体的な理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, such as waiting two or three hours for a single ride at a theme park. I also dislike complicated procedures that take too long.

建议: 内容は理解できますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「I don't mind to take a lot of time」は「I don't mind taking a lot of time」が正しいです。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

示例: I don't mind spending a lot of time on tasks that are important and necessary. However, I get frustrated if I have to spend a long time doing something inefficiently.

建议: 文法ミスが多く、最後の部分が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「they takes me」は「they take me」が正しいです。回答は簡潔にし、文を完結させることが大切です。

示例: Yes, as a student, I have a lot of homework that sometimes takes a long time to complete, so I need to be patient to finish it properly.

建议: 文法と表現が不自然で、意味が分かりにくいです。例えば、「I don't be」は誤りで、「I was not patient」が正しいです。過去と現在の比較を明確にし、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I was impatient, especially when doing things I didn't like, but now I understand the importance of being patient for necessary tasks.

× No, I'm not a patient person because now I have no diseases or injury.

✓ No, I'm not a patient person because now I have no diseases or injuries.

The word 'injury' should be plural 'injuries' to match the plural 'diseases' and to correctly refer to any possible injuries in general.

× But last month I my uncle got hurt by the lacrosse, so I went to the hospital and I'm treated by the medicine.

✓ But last month my uncle got hurt by lacrosse, so I went to the hospital and I was treated with medicine.

The phrase 'I my uncle' is incorrect; 'my uncle' is the subject. 'The lacrosse' should be just 'lacrosse' as a sport. 'I'm treated by the medicine' is incorrect; past tense 'I was treated with medicine' is correct.

× Well, I don't like wait for a long hour hour.

✓ Well, I don't like to wait for a long hour.

The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to wait' (infinitive form). Also, 'hour hour' is a repetition error; only one 'hour' is needed.

× For example, in a theme park, I don't like wait for about two or three hours for only one ride.

✓ For example, in a theme park, I don't like to wait for about two or three hours for only one ride.

After 'like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to wait'.

× And I don't like the complex to.

✓ And I don't like the complex either.

The phrase 'the complex to' is unclear and incorrect. Likely, the student meant 'the complex either' to express dislike similarly.

× I think if The thing is necessary for us to do and important for us, I don't mind to take a lot of time to do that.

✓ I think if the thing is necessary for us to do and important, I don't mind taking a lot of time to do that.

'The thing' should not be capitalized. After 'mind', the verb should be in the gerund form 'taking', not 'to take'.

× But if I do something inefficiently and do a long time, I don't like that.

✓ But if I do something inefficiently and it takes a long time, I don't like that.

The phrase 'do a long time' is incorrect; it should be 'it takes a long time' to express duration.

× Yes, I'm a student now and I have a lot of homework to do every day and sometimes they takes me a lot of time to do and I have to be patient to do the old work and.

✓ Yes, I'm a student now and I have a lot of homework to do every day and sometimes it takes me a lot of time to do, and I have to be patient to do the homework.

'Homework' is singular and uncountable, so the pronoun should be 'it' not 'they'. The verb should be 'takes' to agree with 'it'. 'Old work' is unclear; 'homework' is more appropriate.

× Yes, when I was a child, I don't be.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I wasn't.

The sentence refers to past time, so 'don't be' is incorrect; the past form 'wasn't' is needed.

× I didn't be patient for what I don't want to do.

✓ I wasn't patient with things I didn't want to do.

'Didn't be' is incorrect; the correct past negative form is 'wasn't'. Also, 'for what I don't want to do' should be 'with things I didn't want to do' for clarity and tense consistency.

× So now I can be patient if something is necessary to do or something is connected to another.

✓ So now I can be patient if something is necessary to do or if something is connected to another.

The sentence is mostly correct, but adding 'if' before the second clause improves clarity and parallel structure.