耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法错误较多，影响表达的自然流畅。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，如"It's depend"应为"It depends"，"I'm not be patient"应为"I'm not patient"。同时，回答内容应更简洁，避免重复。

示例: I am somewhat patient, but it depends on the situation. For example, I am very focused and patient when working, but sometimes I get impatient when talking with my parents.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，如"I must face"而非"I must facing"，"it makes me feel"而非"it's make me feel"。同时，避免重复词汇，表达更具体。

示例: I feel impatient when I face failure because it makes me frustrated and irritable. For instance, when I cannot solve a problem, I often feel upset and want to give up.

建议: 回答不够连贯，语法错误影响理解。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并注意时态和主谓一致。表达时应具体说明感受。

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel tired and worried that my efforts might be wasted. It can be frustrating if I don't see progress quickly.

建议: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意句子结构和词汇使用。避免使用不完整或错误的词汇，如"a *******"。

示例: Yes, my dream job is to be a lawyer, which requires a lot of patience. Lawyers need to carefully review evidence and write many contracts, so patience is very important.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如"can't calm down"应为"couldn't calm down"，"expend"应为"spend"，"100% Commission"表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a kid, I couldn't stay calm or spend much time on tasks. But as an adult, I have learned to be more patient and focused.

× It's depend on what things I need to do.

✓ It depends on what things I need to do.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，表示一般现在时。

× If I'm doing my work, I need be very present.

✓ If I'm doing my work, I need to be very present.

情态动词后面应接动词原形，need在此句中作为情态动词使用，后面应加to。

× But sometimes when I talk with my family, especially with my mom and father, I'm not be patient for them.

✓ But sometimes when I talk with my family, especially with my mom and father, I'm not patient with them.

“I'm not be patient”结构错误，正确用法是“I'm not patient”，且介词应为with。

× When I must facing a failure that make me feel impatient, that make me feel irritable, irritable, I often doesn't want to face a failure.

✓ When I must face a failure, that makes me feel impatient and irritable. I often don't want to face a failure.

must后接动词原形face；主语单数时动词make应加-s；否定形式用don't而非doesn't。

× I often doesn't want to face a failure.

✓ I often don't want to face a failure.

主语I用do的否定形式don't，而不是doesn't。

× I can't find a way to resolve some question or problem, it's make me feel fault.

✓ I can't find a way to resolve some questions or problems, it makes me feel at fault.

questions和problems应使用复数；it作为单数主语，动词make应加-s；feel fault应为feel at fault。

× Will I have to do something for a long time?

✓ Do I have to do something for a long time?

一般疑问句用助动词do而非will，will用于将来时。

× I often feel I'm very aware facing failure because that make me feel I waste time.

✓ I often feel I'm very aware when facing failure because that makes me feel like I waste time.

that作为单数主语，动词make应加-s；表达更自然需加when和like。

× It's very time consuming and my struggle, my effort doesn't have work.

✓ It's very time-consuming and my struggle, my effort doesn't work.

time-consuming作为形容词需连字符；my effort作为单数主语，谓语动词用doesn't work。

× Yes, my dream job is to be a lawyer, a ******* if I'm lucky that make me that require me be very patient because the daily life of to be a lawyer have to adopt, write a lot of contrast and change the evidence that need my.

✓ Yes, my dream job is to be a lawyer. If I'm lucky, that will require me to be very patient because the daily life of a lawyer involves adopting, writing a lot of contracts, and changing the evidence that needs me.

句子结构混乱，需拆分成多个句子；动词形式和介词使用错误；contracts拼写错误；主谓一致需注意。

× When I was a kid, I often can't calm down.

✓ When I was a kid, I often couldn't calm down.

过去时态中，情态动词can的过去式为could，否定形式为couldn't。

× I can't expend a lot of time on something.

✓ I couldn't spend a lot of time on something.

过去时态中，情态动词can的过去式为could，动词应为spend而非expend。

× When I need to do something. I can't give 100% Commission at that sense.

✓ When I needed to do something, I couldn't give 100% commitment at that time.

过去时态中，need应为needed；句子连接错误，需用逗号；commission用词错误，应为commitment；at that sense应为at that time。

× But when I become to an adult, I have been more patient.

✓ But when I became an adult, I have been more patient.

过去时态中，become应为became；have been用于现在完成时，符合语境。