耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があり、内容もやや冗長です。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

示例: I'm not very patient because I often give up on studying or trying to get into a higher school. However, I want to improve, so I try to keep practicing and not quit easily.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に正しくありません。質問に対して直接的かつ明確に答え、具体的な理由や状況を説明することが求められます。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time without any progress, such as waiting in a long queue or when tasks take longer than expected.

建议: 内容は理解できますが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善が必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel like quitting because I lose concentration and get tired.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な仕事内容を説明しながら、忍耐が必要かどうかを述べると良いでしょう。

示例: I don't think my job requires much patience. I work part-time at an amusement park where I talk to many people, and the tasks are usually quick and varied.

建议: 回答は質問に合っていますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。接続詞を使い、文をつなげて自然な流れにしましょう。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to lose concentration easily and couldn't study for more than an hour, but now I can study for several hours without losing focus.

× I'm not a patient person because I usually give up many things like studying or getting higher school in the test, but I want to be a patient person so I try to continue to do something.

✓ I'm not a patient person because I usually give up many things like studying or getting into a higher school in the test, but I want to be a patient person so I try to continue doing something.

The phrase 'continue to do something' is grammatically correct but 'continue doing something' is more natural and common in English. Also, 'getting higher school' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'getting into a higher school' or 'entering a higher school.' The verb 'continue' is often followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing ongoing action.

× When I was praised by mother or friends I get I got patience in my life so.

✓ When I was praised by my mother or friends, I got patience in my life.

The sentence mixes present tense 'get' and past tense 'got'. Since the action is in the past ('was praised'), the verb should be in past tense 'got'. Also, 'mother' should be preceded by 'my' to indicate possession. The sentence is corrected to maintain consistent past tense.

× When I was praised by mother or friends I get I got patience in my life so.

✓ When I was praised by my mother or friends, I gained patience in my life.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'I get I got patience' is incorrect and redundant. Using 'I gained patience' is clearer and more natural. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for correct sentence structure.

× I feel that I want to quit doing that when I continue to something for a long hours and because I usually lose concentration.

✓ I feel that I want to quit doing that when I continue doing something for a long time because I usually lose concentration.

The phrase 'continue to something' is incorrect; it should be 'continue doing something'. Also, 'for a long hours' is incorrect; it should be 'for a long time' or 'for many hours'. The conjunction 'and because' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices.

× I work in amusement park as a part time job and I at that time I talk with a lot of people so and have been many things.

✓ I work at an amusement park as a part-time job, and at that time, I talk with a lot of people and have experienced many things.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to working at a place. 'Amusement park' needs an article 'an'. 'Part time job' should be hyphenated as 'part-time job'. The phrase 'have been many things' is unclear; 'have experienced many things' is more appropriate. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× So I think it's not it's not patient.

✓ So I think it's not patient.

The repetition 'it's not it's not' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'it's not'. Also, 'patient' is an adjective describing a person, so the sentence is acceptable after removing the repetition.

× When I was a child, I lose concentration too easily.

✓ When I was a child, I lost concentration too easily.

The clause 'When I was a child' sets the time in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'lost' instead of present tense 'lose' to maintain tense consistency.

× I can't continue to studying for one hour.

✓ I can't continue studying for one hour.

The verb 'continue' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. Therefore, 'continue to studying' is incorrect; it should be 'continue studying'.

× I can continue to studying about several hours.

✓ I can continue studying for several hours.

Similar to the previous correction, 'continue to studying' is incorrect; it should be 'continue studying'. Also, 'about several hours' is unnatural; 'for several hours' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate duration.