耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add a clear reason using simple linking words like 'because'. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to sound more natural.

示例: Yes, I am a patient person because I believe staying calm helps me handle difficult situations better.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentence and use linking words to explain your feelings clearly. Also, avoid grammatical mistakes and be specific about what makes you impatient.

示例: I feel impatient when someone provokes me by insulting or using bad words, because it is hard to stay calm in such situations.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words like 'although' or 'but' to show contrast. Keep your sentences concise and relevant.

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel confident that I can master it, although sometimes I get frustrated, but I usually stay patient and keep trying.

建议: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Be specific about why patience is important in a job.

示例: Yes, my job requires patience because we face many stressful situations, so being patient helps me work sincerely and effectively.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear comparison using linking words like 'because' or 'now'. Also, correct grammar and complete your sentences for better clarity.

示例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I understand the complexities of life better and have matured over time.

× Yes, I always maintain patience whenever I'm in a worst situation and I can handle because there is a power inside me which force me to handle that situation and maintain patience.

✓ Yes, I always maintain patience whenever I'm in a worst situation and I can handle it because there is a power inside me which forces me to handle that situation and maintain patience.

The word 'force' should be 'forces' to agree with the singular subject 'power'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× Yes, I always maintain patience whenever I'm in a worst situation and I can handle because there is a power inside me which force me to handle that situation and maintain patience.

✓ Yes, I always maintain patience whenever I'm in a worst situation and I can handle it because there is a power inside me which forces me to handle that situation and maintain patience.

The phrase 'handle because' is incomplete and missing the object 'it'. Adding 'it' after 'handle' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× When I try to maintain patience but in front of me the person provoke me to fight or abuse me like calling me with bad words then I.

✓ When I try to maintain patience but the person in front of me provokes me to fight or abuses me by calling me bad words, then I...

The verb 'provoke' should be 'provokes' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'calling me with bad words' is better expressed as 'calling me bad words' or 'abusing me with bad words'.

× When I try to maintain patience but in front of me the person provoke me to fight or abuse me like calling me with bad words then I.

✓ When I try to maintain patience but the person in front of me provokes me to fight or abuses me by calling me bad words, then I lose my patience.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or conclusion. Adding 'then I lose my patience' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I feel that I can do masters, I can do master that thing which I'm doing for a long time and sometime I will got frustrated but usually I maintain patience and I do it by my offer.

✓ I feel that I can master that thing which I'm doing for a long time and sometimes I get frustrated but usually I maintain patience and I do it by my effort.

'Masters' should be 'master' as a verb here. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Will got' is incorrect; it should be 'get'. 'Offer' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'effort'.

× I feel that I can do masters, I can do master that thing which I'm doing for a long time and sometime I will got frustrated but usually I maintain patience and I do it by my offer.

✓ I feel that I can master that thing which I'm doing for a long time and sometimes I get frustrated but usually I maintain patience and I do it by my effort.

The phrase 'will got' is incorrect; 'got' is past tense and cannot follow 'will'. The correct form is 'will get' or simply 'get' for present/future meaning.

× I feel that I can do masters, I can do master that thing which I'm doing for a long time and sometime I will got frustrated but usually I maintain patience and I do it by my offer.

✓ I feel that I can master that thing which I'm doing for a long time and sometimes I get frustrated but usually I maintain patience and I do it by my effort.

The phrase 'do it by my offer' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'do it by my effort' to express exerting effort.

× Yes, almost every job requires their employees to be patient because job in job you have to be sincere and patience and hard working.

✓ Yes, almost every job requires its employees to be patient because in every job you have to be sincere, patient, and hardworking.

'Their employees' should be 'its employees' because 'job' is singular. Also, 'patience' should be 'patient' to match the adjective form. 'Hard working' should be 'hardworking' as one word.

× Yes, almost every job requires their employees to be patient because job in job you have to be sincere and patience and hard working.

✓ Yes, almost every job requires its employees to be patient because in every job you have to be sincere, patient, and hardworking.

'Patience' is a noun but here an adjective 'patient' is needed to describe employees. Similarly, 'hard working' should be the adjective 'hardworking'.

× So there are lot of stress in every job.

✓ So there is a lot of stress in every job.

The phrase 'there are lot of stress' is incorrect because 'stress' is uncountable singular noun; it should be 'there is a lot of stress'.

× So it is our right to maintain.

✓ So it is our right to maintain patience.

The sentence is incomplete; 'maintain' needs an object. Adding 'patience' completes the meaning.

× When I was a child, I don't know the complexities of things, so I don't know whether where to maintain patients or they are not.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't know the complexities of things, so I didn't know whether to maintain patience or not.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Don't know' should be 'didn't know' to match past time frame. Also, 'patients' should be 'patience'.

× When I was a child, I don't know the complexities of things, so I don't know whether where to maintain patients or they are not.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't know the complexities of things, so I didn't know whether to maintain patience or not.

The phrase 'whether where to maintain patients or they are not' is incorrect. It should be 'whether to maintain patience or not' for clarity and correctness.

× No, I am a educated person, mature now.

✓ No, I am an educated person, mature now.

'A educated' is incorrect because 'educated' starts with a vowel sound; it should be 'an educated'.

× I know how to maintain patients and how to.

✓ I know how to maintain patience and how to do it.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'do it' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.