耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“I was a patient person”应为“I am a patient person”，“I will patient”应为“I am patient”。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的时态和词汇表达耐心。

示例: Yes, I am a patient person. For example, when I face difficult problems in my studies, I stay calm and work steadily until I solve them.

建议: 回答中词汇使用不准确，如“influencement”应为“influence”，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇并简洁表达原因。

示例: I feel impatient when people around me make noise while I am studying because it distracts me and makes it hard to concentrate.

建议: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议练习使用简单句表达感受，并用连接词使句子流畅。

示例: I sometimes feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time. However, I try to calm myself down and keep working until I finish the task.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句型和词汇，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

示例: Yes, my job as a student requires me to be patient. When I encounter difficult topics, I stay calm and work hard to understand them.

建议: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“I'm grow up”应为“I have grown up”。建议练习正确使用时态和比较结构。

示例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have grown up and learned to be more persistent when completing tasks.

× I think I was a patient person.

✓ I think I am a patient person.

这里谈论的是现在的性格特征，应该用现在时态。过去时态“was”表示过去的状态，不符合语境。

× I will patient to complete some difficult uh, such as I have some difficult problems on my study.

✓ I will be patient to complete some difficult tasks, such as some difficult problems in my study.

“patient”是形容词，前面需要助动词“be”构成表语；“difficult”后面应接名词，这里用“tasks”更合适；“on my study”应改为“in my study”表示在学习中。

× I have a patient to finish it.

✓ I have the patience to finish it.

“patient”是形容词，不能作为名词使用，正确名词形式是“patience”，表示耐心。

× some influencement from your environment will make me impatient.

✓ some influence from my environment will make me impatient.

“influencement”不是正确单词，应为“influence”；“your environment”应改为“my environment”，因为说话者指自己的环境。

× when I was studying, uh, somebody around me is allowed and make the noise or make me impatient.

✓ when I was studying, somebody around me was loud and made noise, which made me impatient.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态；“is allowed”用法错误，应改为“was loud”；“make the noise”应为“made noise”；“make me impatient”应为“made me impatient”。

× I think maybe I will impatient, uh, when I feel uh, have a long time to complete things,

✓ I think maybe I will be impatient when I feel I have a long time to complete things,

“impatient”是形容词，前面需要助动词“be”；“feel have”缺少主语，应加“I”。

× but uh, I will make, make me, make me uh, calm down and to continue to finish the work.

✓ but I will calm down and continue to finish the work.

“make me calm down”结构重复且不自然，直接用“I will calm down”更简洁；“to continue”中“to”不必要。

× I think in me patient when I meet some difficult in my study,

✓ I think I am patient when I meet some difficulties in my study,

“in me patient”结构错误，应为“I am patient”；“some difficult”应为“some difficulties”，名词复数形式。

× I will make me come down to finish the work.

✓ I will calm down to finish the work.

“make me come down”表达不正确，应为“calm down”；“come down”在此语境中不合适。

× I think I'm grow up and I, I'm put more patient to complete some tasks.

✓ I think I've grown up and I put more patience into completing some tasks.

“I'm grow up”时态错误，应为现在完成时“I've grown up”；“put more patient”应为“put more patience”；“to complete”改为“into completing”更自然。

× and uh, compare I was a child and more patient now.

✓ and compared to when I was a child, I am more patient now.

“compare I was a child and more patient now”结构不完整，应使用“compared to when I was a child”引导比较状语从句。