耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和语法。

示例: It depends on the situation. If someone asks me for help, I usually respond quickly because I'm not very patient. However, when I'm alone, I can be more patient.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

示例: I feel impatient when things don't go as planned because it makes me nervous and motivates me to improve the situation.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，词汇使用不当。建议简化表达，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

示例: I feel bored and restless when I have to do the same thing for a long time because it makes me want to do something different.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意动词搭配和句子结构，使表达更自然。

示例: Absolutely. When I work in the laboratory, I must be patient because rushing can cause serious problems.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清。建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚表达因经验增加而变得更有耐心。

示例: Of course. As I have grown older, I have gained more experience, so I am more patient than when I was a child.

× If a friend or a person ask asked me or let me to do something I I will do it quickly.

✓ If a friend or a person asks me or lets me do something, I will do it quickly.

这里的主语是单数（a friend or a person），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，因此应使用"asks"和"lets"，而不是过去式"asked"。此外，"let"后面不加"to"，直接接动词原形。

× Personally speaking, I would say the bad outcomes will makes me feel impatient because it will it will makes me nervous and and I want to do something better.

✓ Personally speaking, I would say the bad outcomes will make me feel impatient because it will make me nervous and I want to do something better.

主语是复数"bad outcomes"，谓语动词应使用原形"make"，而不是第三人称单数形式"makes"。此外，"it will makes"应改为"it will make"，因为助动词后动词用原形。

× Well, I guess it may be bold to me because because when I have to do a lot of we have to do one thing for a long time, I I feel not relaxed and want to change my mind. So it's very bored to me.

✓ Well, I guess it may be boring to me because when I have to do one thing for a long time, I feel not relaxed and want to change my mind. So it's very boring to me.

"bold"用错了，正确应为"boring"表示令人感到无聊。"bored"是形容人的感受，"boring"是形容事物的性质。句中"a lot of we have to do"结构混乱，应删去多余部分。

× Absolutely, when I get into the laboratory I must to be patient with my job otherwise it may cause advance adverse influence to my workplace.

✓ Absolutely, when I get into the laboratory I must be patient with my job; otherwise, it may cause adverse effects to my workplace.

情态动词"must"后不加"to"，应直接接动词原形"be"。"advance adverse influence"表达不准确，改为"adverse effects"更自然。

× Of course as I get older I'm more patient with something because I guess I have experience since the more than than in my child, so I have more patience to do with it.

✓ Of course, as I get older, I'm more patient with things because I guess I have more experience than when I was a child, so I have more patience to deal with it.

"more than than in my child"表达错误，应为"more experience than when I was a child"。"patient with something"更常用复数"things"。"do with it"应改为"deal with it"，更符合习惯用法。