耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and using correct grammar. For example, instead of repeating 'tolerate' and 'a lot', say 'I consider myself a patient person because I can tolerate many things, even nonsense.'

示例: I consider myself a patient person because I can tolerate many things, even nonsense, without getting upset.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily. For example, you can say, 'I feel impatient when I have a job that must be finished within a deadline, but the work is not yet complete.'

示例: I feel impatient when I have a job that must be finished within a deadline, but the work is not yet complete, which makes me anxious.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words properly. For example, you can say, 'I don't mind working for a long time if the task is interesting; however, if it is boring and monotonous, I get quite bored.'

示例: I don't mind working for a long time if the task is interesting; however, if it is boring and monotonous, I get quite bored.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, provide more specific details. For example, 'Yes, my job requires a lot of patience, especially when dealing with difficult patients who can be troublemakers.'

示例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience, especially when dealing with difficult patients who can be troublemakers.

建议: Your answer is good but contains many filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to reduce these fillers to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, you can add linking words for coherence. For example, 'Actually, I think I am more patient now than when I was younger because I used to get mad easily when things didn't go my way.'

示例: Actually, I think I am more patient now than when I was younger because I used to get mad easily when things didn't go my way.

× I would say I am quite a lot of patient person because I I can tolerate a lot of things and can tolerate a lot of nonsense thing.

✓ I would say I am quite a patient person because I can tolerate a lot of things and a lot of nonsense.

The phrase 'a lot of patient person' is incorrect because 'patient' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a lot of'. Also, 'nonsense thing' should be pluralized to 'nonsense' or 'nonsense things' to match the plural context. The corrected sentence uses 'a patient person' and removes redundancy and incorrect pluralization.

× I would say time makes me feel impatient when, for instance, when I have a job that is required to be done in a certain time period, however the work is incomplete, then I get.

✓ I would say time makes me feel impatient, for instance, when I have a job that needs to be done within a certain time period, but the work is incomplete, then I get impatient.

The original sentence is incomplete and has awkward structure. The phrase 'then I get' is incomplete and needs an object or complement. Also, 'however' is incorrectly used; 'but' fits better here. The corrected sentence completes the thought and improves clarity.

× I don't think that much on the length of the time required for to do a shortened job.

✓ I don't think that much about the length of time required to do a short job.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'think about' is the correct collocation. Also, 'for to do' is incorrect; it should be 'to do'. 'Shortened job' is awkward; 'short job' is better. The correction fixes preposition use and phrasing.

× Yes, actually my job require me to be very patient.

✓ Yes, actually my job requires me to be very patient.

The subject 'my job' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires' to agree in number. The original uses 'require' which is plural form, causing subject-verb disagreement.

× In particular when I am dealing with the patients which are quite trouble troublemaker then you need to be more patient.

✓ In particular, when I am dealing with patients who are quite troublemakers, then you need to be more patient.

'The patients' can be plural without 'the' unless specific patients are meant. 'Which' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Trouble troublemaker' is redundant and incorrect; 'troublemakers' is the correct plural noun. The correction fixes pluralization and pronoun use.

× Actually, umm, I think I'm more patient uh, now, umm uh, compared to when I was younger because I used to get mad easily when things don't go as my way.

✓ Actually, umm, I think I'm more patient now compared to when I was younger because I used to get mad easily when things didn't go my way.

The phrase 'things don't go as my way' mixes present tense 'don't' with past context. It should be past tense 'didn't' to match 'used to'. Also, 'as my way' is incorrect; 'my way' suffices. The correction aligns tense and phrasing.