耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并避免重复和不必要的词汇。

示例: To be honest, I am not a patient person. Sometimes I want to do things quickly because I get very eager and can't wait.

建议: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清楚，建议使用简单句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time. For example, I don't enjoy fishing because it takes too much time and I feel like I'm wasting my time.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议简洁明了地表达感受，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I feel a bit anxious when I have to do something for a long time. However, I am trying to be more patient because it helps me improve.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并用具体细节支持观点。

示例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I need to perform on stage and show my talents to the audience.

建议: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

示例: I think I am not more patient now than when I was a child. It is still hard for me to focus on one thing for a long time because my mind often wanders.

× I'm really, really wanted to do that and I can't wait to do that

✓ I'm really, really wanting to do that and I can't wait to do that

这里使用了过去时态'wanted'，但句子表达的是现在的感受，应该用现在进行时'wanting'。

× so I can't tolerate the something.

✓ so I can't tolerate something.

'the something'中的定冠词'the'使用错误，'something'前不需要冠词。

× many patients, people like to to have fishing on near the river

✓ many patient people like to go fishing near the river

'have fishing on near the river'中介词使用错误，正确表达是'go fishing near the river'。

× I think it needed too much time to on these things

✓ I think it needs too much time for these things

'needed'时态错误，应为现在时'needs'；'to on'介词错误，应为'for'。

× So I don't want to waste the time on I can. I don't.

✓ So I don't want to waste time if I can help it.

句子结构混乱，'on I can. I don't'不合语法，改为常用表达。

× I'm a little bit anxious tea with the long time things.

✓ I'm a little bit anxious about long-lasting things.

'anxious tea'错误，应该是'anxious about'；'long time things'表达不自然，改为'long-lasting things'。

× I'd like to do some things immediately to start with the things.

✓ I'd like to do some things immediately to start with.

'start with the things'多余，'start with'后不需要'the things'。

× I'd like to try a patience to treat with some things in the future

✓ I'd like to try to be patient to deal with some things in the future

'try a patience'错误，应该是'try to be patient'；'treat with'错误，应该是'deal with'。

× my job needed to show the audience were how wonderful performers on the stage

✓ my job needs to show the audience how wonderful performers are on the stage

'needed'应为现在时'needs'；'were'用法错误，应为'are'。

× so I needed to keep patient and prefer the ways with my talents on the stage

✓ so I need to keep patient and perform in my own way with my talents on the stage

'prefer the ways'错误，应为'perform in my own way'；时态应为现在时。

× I don't that's like they the now nor past.

✓ I don't think I'm more patient now than in the past.

句子结构混乱，'that's like they the now nor past'不合语法，改为正确表达。

× I have the patient.

✓ I have patience.

'patient'是形容词，名词应为'patience'。

× It's really hard to focus on the your, your attention on something and, uh, you may be think other things and.

✓ It's really hard to focus your attention on something, and you may think about other things.

'the your'重复错误，应去掉'the'；'may be think'错误，应为'may think about'。