耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且未直接回答是否有耐心的问题。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子表达观点，避免重复和无关内容。

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when taking care of my son. Although sometimes I feel tired, I always try to stay calm and understanding.

建议: 回答内容较为简单，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用连贯的句子，适当使用连接词，并丰富细节描述。

示例: I feel impatient mainly when I am very tired. For instance, after a long day at work, I often feel exhausted and find it hard to stay patient with others.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel energetic at first. However, as time passes, I become tired and a bit impatient because it consumes a lot of my energy.

建议: 回答基本符合要求，但语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议注意名词和形容词的正确形式，使用更自然的表达。

示例: Yes, my job involves market investigation, so I need to be very patient when communicating with different customers. Patience helps me understand their needs better.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，明确表达观点。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. After becoming a mother and spending time with my son, I have learned to be more patient, which has strengthened our relationship.

× I could surely I'm not a passionate person because I have a enough passion to treat my son so this made me always feel re greeted and guilty.

✓ I could say surely I'm not a patient person because I have enough patience to treat my son, so this always makes me feel regretful and guilty.

句中“could”用法不当，应为“could say”表示“我可以说”。另外，“a enough”应为“enough”，且“passion”应为“patience”，因为题目问的是耐心。最后，“re greeted”应为“regretful”，表示遗憾。

× I could surely I'm not a passionate person because I have a enough passion to treat my son so this made me always feel re greeted and guilty.

✓ I could say surely I'm not a patient person because I have enough patience to treat my son, so this always makes me feel regretful and guilty.

“a enough”是错误的量词搭配，正确用法是“enough”前面不加冠词。

× I could surely I'm not a passionate person because I have a enough passion to treat my son so this made me always feel re greeted and guilty.

✓ I could say surely I'm not a patient person because I have enough patience to treat my son, so this always makes me feel regretful and guilty.

“re greeted”拼写错误，应为“regretful”，表示遗憾的形容词。

× When I feel tired I always lack of patient at this time.

✓ When I feel tired I always lack patience at this time.

“lack of patient”中“patient”应为不可数名词“patience”，且“lack”后不加“of”。

× For example when I came from the work I feel tired and I exhausted.

✓ For example, when I come from work I feel tired and exhausted.

“came”是过去式，但句意为习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“come”。“I exhausted”缺少系动词，应为“I am exhausted”。

× For example when I came from the work I feel tired and I exhausted.

✓ For example, when I come from work I feel tired and exhausted.

“I exhausted”缺少系动词“am”，应为“I am exhausted”。

× So at this time I will not patient.

✓ So at this time I will not be patient.

“patient”是形容词，前面需要系动词“be”。

× If I take a long time to do something, at the beginning I maybe feel full of energy, but in the end I maybe feel tired and impatient because all of the things takes me a lot of energy, but I can't live away.

✓ If I take a long time to do something, at the beginning I may feel full of energy, but in the end I may feel tired and impatient because all of the things take a lot of my energy, but I can't live without it.

“maybe”应为情态动词“may”表示可能性；“takes”应与复数主语“things”一致用“take”；“live away”表达错误，应为“live without it”。

× If I take a long time to do something, at the beginning I maybe feel full of energy, but in the end I maybe feel tired and impatient because all of the things takes me a lot of energy, but I can't live away.

✓ If I take a long time to do something, at the beginning I may feel full of energy, but in the end I may feel tired and impatient because all of the things take a lot of my energy, but I can't live without it.

主语“all of the things”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“take”。

× Yes, because my job is the market investigation, so I need to have a lot of patient to communicate different kinds of our customers.

✓ Yes, because my job is market investigation, so I need to have a lot of patience to communicate with different kinds of our customers.

“communicate”后应加介词“with”；“a lot of patient”中“patient”应为不可数名词“patience”。

× Yes, because my job is the market investigation, so I need to have a lot of patient to communicate different kinds of our customers.

✓ Yes, because my job is market investigation, so I need to have a lot of patience to communicate with different kinds of our customers.

“a lot of patient”错误，应为“a lot of patience”，因为“patience”是不可数名词。

× At this time I should have patience and communicate with them and I can.

✓ At this time I should have patience to communicate with them, and I can.

“communicate with them and I can”结构不完整，应补充“to communicate with them”。

× Yes, when I become became a mother I after a few years staying with my son I feel I become more and more patient because I find if I spend more patient with my son and our relationship become stronger and also my son.

✓ Yes, when I became a mother, after a few years staying with my son, I feel I have become more and more patient because I find if I spend more patience with my son, our relationship becomes stronger, and so does my son.

“become became”重复，应用过去式“became”；“spend more patient”应为“spend more patience”；“relationship become”主谓不一致，应为“relationship becomes”；“also my son”表达不完整，改为“so does my son”。