耐心— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
Actually I'm not the kind of patient person, I easily get angry if many things don't write on my plans. But now I'm grow up and I'm more mature, I'm trying to keep my energy calm and so situation correctly.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
There are many situation that make me feel angry or impatient. If I have conversation with my friend and they don't understand my meaning, I feel upset a little bit. For another example, if I start the day with bad coffee, I cannot work effectively that day.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
Personality I feel a little boring sometimes but it depend on what something I do. For example, I work for a long time but this job is my dream and reliable. I love to connect with many coworker to learning more knowledge.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Yes Izzy, for me, many job out there require being patient. If I work with happy energy and calmness, I can connect with many coworkers and share with them reliable and meaningful information that's helpful for my job.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes, as I said before, I grow up and I'm more mature nowadays. Since I started working I practice every day to keep my energy calm and more patient. That helped me a lot to handle many situation in my life and I can do it correctly.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分数: 60.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ và cách dùng từ để diễn đạt ý một cách tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm grow up' và dùng từ phù hợp như 'calm' thay vì 'keep my energy calm'.
示例: I'm not a very patient person; I tend to get frustrated when things don't go according to my plans. However, as I've grown older, I've learned to stay calm and handle situations more maturely.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分数: 70.0建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít trong danh từ (ví dụ: 'many situations' thay vì 'many situation'). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'feel'.
示例: Several situations make me feel impatient. For instance, when I have a conversation with a friend who doesn't understand my point, I get a bit upset. Also, if I start the day with bad coffee, I find it hard to work effectively.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分数: 55.0建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'Personality' (có thể bạn muốn nói 'Personally'), 'it depend' nên là 'it depends'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
示例: Personally, I sometimes feel a bit bored when doing something for a long time, but it depends on the task. For example, I can work for hours if the job is my dream and reliable. I also enjoy connecting with coworkers to learn new things.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分数: 65.0建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều của danh từ ('many jobs' thay vì 'many job'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không tự nhiên như 'happy energy'. Hãy dùng từ phù hợp và câu mạch lạc hơn.
示例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. When I stay calm and positive, I can communicate effectively with my coworkers and share useful and reliable information that helps us work better.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp thì động từ ('I have grown up' thay vì 'I grow up') và số nhiều ('many situations'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng cụm từ không tự nhiên như 'keep my energy calm'.
示例: Yes, I have grown up and become more mature. Since I started working, I practice staying calm and patient every day. This has helped me handle many situations in my life more effectively.
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