耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi sai như 'I'm grow up'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I'm not a very patient person because I tend to get frustrated when things don't go according to my plans. However, as I've grown older, I've learned to stay calm and handle situations more maturely.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng số nhiều, số ít (ví dụ: 'many situation' nên là 'many situations'). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

示例: Several situations make me feel impatient. For instance, when I talk with my friends and they don't understand what I mean, I get a bit upset. Also, if I start my day with bad coffee, I find it hard to work effectively.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'Personality' thay vì 'Personally', 'it depend' nên là 'it depends'. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, từ nối và chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Personally, I sometimes feel a bit bored when I do something for a long time, but it depends on the task. For example, I can work long hours because this job is my dream and very reliable. I also enjoy connecting with coworkers to learn new things.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng tên người phỏng vấn trong câu trả lời và chú ý ngữ pháp như 'many job' nên là 'many jobs'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ nối và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. When I stay calm and positive, I can communicate better with my coworkers and share useful and reliable information that helps us work effectively.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng thì, ví dụ 'I grow up' nên là 'I have grown up'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ nối và chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have grown up and become more mature. Since I started working, I practice staying calm and patient every day. This has helped me handle many situations in life more effectively.

× Actually I'm not the kind of patient person, I easily get angry if many things don't write on my plans.

✓ Actually, I'm not the kind of patient person; I easily get angry if many things don't go according to my plans.

The phrase 'the kind of patient person' requires the definite article 'the' before 'kind'. Also, 'don't write on my plans' is incorrect; it should be 'don't go according to my plans' to express plans not being followed.

× But now I'm grow up and I'm more mature, I'm trying to keep my energy calm and so situation correctly.

✓ But now I've grown up and I'm more mature; I'm trying to keep my energy calm and handle situations correctly.

The phrase 'I'm grow up' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I've grown up' is appropriate to indicate change over time. Also, 'so situation correctly' is unclear and should be 'handle situations correctly'.

× There are many situation that make me feel angry or impatient.

✓ There are many situations that make me feel angry or impatient.

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to agree with 'many'.

× If I have conversation with my friend and they don't understand my meaning, I feel upset a little bit.

✓ If I have a conversation with my friend and they don't understand my meaning, I feel a little upset.

The phrase 'have conversation' needs the article 'a' before 'conversation'. Also, 'upset a little bit' is better expressed as 'a little upset'.

× For another example, if I start the day with bad coffee, I cannot work effectively that day.

✓ For another example, if I start the day with bad coffee, I cannot work effectively that day.

No grammatical error related to the problem types here; sentence is correct.

× Personality I feel a little boring sometimes but it depend on what something I do.

✓ Personally, I feel a little bored sometimes, but it depends on what I do.

'Personality' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'Personally'. 'Boring' describes something that causes boredom; 'bored' describes the feeling. 'It depend' should be 'it depends' for subject-verb agreement. 'What something I do' is incorrect; it should be 'what I do'.

× For example, I work for a long time but this job is my dream and reliable.

✓ For example, I work for a long time, but this job is my dream and reliable.

No singular/plural error here; sentence is acceptable though 'reliable' might be better as 'a reliable job'.

× I love to connect with many coworker to learning more knowledge.

✓ I love to connect with many coworkers to learn more knowledge.

'Coworker' should be plural 'coworkers' to match 'many'. 'To learning' should be 'to learn' as the infinitive form. 'More knowledge' is acceptable.

× Yes Izzy, for me, many job out there require being patient.

✓ Yes, Izzy, for me, many jobs out there require being patient.

'Job' should be plural 'jobs' to agree with 'many'.

× If I work with happy energy and calmness, I can connect with many coworkers and share with them reliable and meaningful information that's helpful for my job.

✓ If I work with happy energy and calmness, I can connect with many coworkers and share reliable and meaningful information with them that's helpful for my job.

The phrase 'share with them reliable and meaningful information' is awkward; 'share reliable and meaningful information with them' is correct.

× Yes, as I said before, I grow up and I'm more mature nowadays.

✓ Yes, as I said before, I have grown up and I'm more mature nowadays.

'I grow up' is incorrect in this context; the present perfect 'I have grown up' is appropriate to indicate change over time.

× Since I started working I practice every day to keep my energy calm and more patient.

✓ Since I started working, I have practiced every day to keep my energy calm and be more patient.

'I practice every day' should be present perfect 'I have practiced every day' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Also, 'keep my energy calm and more patient' should be 'keep my energy calm and be more patient'.

× That helped me a lot to handle many situation in my life and I can do it correctly.

✓ That has helped me a lot to handle many situations in my life, and I can do it correctly.

'That helped me' can be better as present perfect 'That has helped me' to show relevance to present. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations'.