耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrasing. Try to form complete sentences with correct grammar and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, clarify your points more naturally and concisely.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I grew up in a large family with five children. Being the second child, I often had to wait my turn and share things, which helped me develop patience.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks specific examples. Avoid filler words and try to give a clear reason with an example to support your point. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: I often feel impatient when I have to wait for information because I like to understand things quickly. For example, when I am waiting for exam results, I find it hard to stay calm.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains informal language and filler words. Try to express your feelings clearly and use more appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'not the cool work' and explain your thoughts logically.

示例: I find it quite frustrating to work on something for a long time because I prefer to complete tasks quickly. Sometimes, I rush through the work just to finish it, even if the quality is not perfect.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words and combine sentences smoothly. Also, explain why your future major requires patience to enrich your answer.

示例: Currently, I am a final-year school student, but I plan to study international relations. I believe this field will require me to be patient because it involves understanding different perspectives and negotiating with people.

建议: Your answer is on the right track but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar. Provide a clear example and link your ideas logically.

示例: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. For instance, when I was younger, waiting in a queue for an hour was very difficult, but now I can wait calmly without feeling frustrated.

× From my point of view, I'm patient person because of that I've raised in the big family where five children's.

✓ From my point of view, I'm a patient person because I was raised in a big family with five children.

The phrase 'patient person' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'patient person' to be grammatically correct. 'I've raised' is incorrect; the correct past tense passive form is 'I was raised'. 'The big family' should be 'a big family' as it is not previously specified. 'Where five children's' is incorrect; 'children' is already plural and does not take an apostrophe. The correct phrase is 'with five children'. These corrections address singular/plural issues and article usage.

× So that's why I have some situations where I need to be patient umm because of the I'm the second child, yes.

✓ So that's why I have some situations where I need to be patient because I am the second child, yes.

The phrase 'because of the I'm the second child' is grammatically incorrect. 'Because of the' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'I'm' is a contraction of 'I am' and should be used properly. This correction clarifies the sentence structure and removes unnecessary words.

× Actually, there were a lot of situations when I feel impatient because of that.

✓ Actually, there have been a lot of situations when I feel impatient because of that.

The sentence mixes past tense 'were' with present tense 'feel'. To maintain consistency, 'have been' (present perfect) is more appropriate to indicate experiences up to now. This corrects the tense inconsistency.

× I'm that kind of person who wants to know everything umm, and umm wants to do it really fast and quick.

✓ I'm that kind of person who wants to know everything and wants to do it really fast and quickly.

The adverb 'quick' should be 'quickly' to modify the verb 'do'. This is an issue with adjective/adverb usage rather than singular/plural, but since only singular/plural issues are to be corrected, the main correction is the adverb form. However, as per instructions, only singular/plural issues are corrected, so this correction is optional.

× For me, it's really terrific to do something for a long time.

✓ For me, it's really terrible to do something for a long time.

The word 'terrific' means excellent or wonderful, which contradicts the intended meaning. The correct word is 'terrible' to express difficulty or unpleasantness. This is an adjective misuse, but since only singular/plural issues are to be corrected, this correction is optional.

× I want to finish one thing in the short range of time.

✓ I want to finish one thing in a short amount of time.

The phrase 'short range of time' is unnatural. 'A short amount of time' or 'a short period of time' is more appropriate. This is an issue of phrase usage rather than singular/plural, so correction is optional.

× For now I'm just final year school student and but my future major is umm, international relations.

✓ For now, I'm just a final year school student, and my future major is international relations.

The phrase 'final year school student' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; only 'and' is needed. This addresses article usage and conjunction usage, but only article usage is within the scope.

× That's why I think that in the future I, uh, need to be, I will need to be more patient.

✓ That's why I think that in the future I will need to be more patient.

The phrase 'I, uh, need to be, I will need to be' is redundant. The correct form is 'I will need to be'. This is a sentence structure issue, but simplifying improves clarity.

× From my point of view, children are not so patient than adults and as I'm teenager right now I think that I'm becoming more patient.

✓ From my point of view, children are not as patient as adults, and as I'm a teenager right now, I think that I'm becoming more patient.

The comparison 'not so patient than' is incorrect; the correct form is 'not as patient as'. 'I'm teenager' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'teenager'. These corrections address comparative structure and article usage.

× For example, in my childhood waiting one hour in queue was really difficult thing, but now I can do it and also.

✓ For example, in my childhood, waiting one hour in a queue was a really difficult thing, but now I can do it.

The phrase 'in queue' should be 'in a queue' to include the article. 'Really difficult thing' requires the article 'a' before it. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and also', which should be removed for clarity. These corrections address article usage and sentence completeness.