耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达要更自然流畅。可以简洁直接地说明自己不耐心，并给出原因。

示例: No, I am not a patient person because I often feel rushed and dislike spending too much time thinking about things.

建议: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误，并用连词连接句子。可以具体说明做作业时为什么感到不耐烦。

示例: I feel impatient when I do my homework because it takes a long time and I get tired easily, which makes me want to finish quickly.

建议: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。应直接表达感受，并用连词使句子连贯。

示例: I feel satisfied when I complete a long task because it gives me a sense of achievement and confidence.

建议: 回答应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然。可以直接说明学习语言需要耐心。

示例: I don't have a job since I'm a high school student, but learning languages requires a lot of patience.

建议: 回答应更流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以具体说明为什么现在更有耐心。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now because I have improved my grades and gained more confidence through studying.

× No, I'm always impatient and I don't have enough time to think about more and I hate think about more, so I don't have enough patience.

✓ No, I'm always impatient and I don't have enough time to think more and I hate thinking more, so I don't have enough patience.

这里“think about more”中的“more”不需要加介词“about”，且“hate”后面应接动名词形式“thinking”。建议去掉“about”，并将“think”改为“thinking”。

× When I was finishing my homework I don't have a enough patience to think about more and I feel is so tired and I'm a lazy student.

✓ When I was finishing my homework I didn't have enough patience to think more and I felt so tired and I'm a lazy student.

句子中时态不一致，描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，如“don't”应改为“didn't”，“feel”应改为“felt”。另外，“a enough”应为“enough”，去掉冠词。

× When I was finishing my homework I don't have a enough patience to think about more and I feel is so tired and I'm a lazy student.

✓ When I was finishing my homework I didn't have enough patience to think more and I felt so tired and I'm a lazy student.

“a enough patience”中“patience”是不可数名词，不需要冠词“a”，应直接用“enough patience”。

× When I was finishing my homework I don't have a enough patience to think about more and I feel is so tired and I'm a lazy student.

✓ When I was finishing my homework I didn't have enough patience to think more and I felt so tired and I'm a lazy student.

“think about more”中的“about”使用不当，通常“think more”即可表达意思，去掉“about”更自然。

× When I was finishing my homework I don't have a enough patience to think about more and I feel is so tired and I'm a lazy student.

✓ When I was finishing my homework I didn't have enough patience to think more and I felt so tired and I was a lazy student.

“I feel is so tired”结构错误，应为“I felt so tired”。另外，“I'm a lazy student”描述过去时应改为“I was a lazy student”。

× I feel it's so cool and uh, because for me, I always build the ego sets and uh, when I was finishing it and uh, I feel so good and comfortable for me.

✓ I feel it's so cool because, for me, I always build the ego sets and when I finish it, I feel so good and comfortable.

“comfortable for me”中“for me”多余，直接用“comfortable”即可。动词时态应保持一致，“when I was finishing it”改为“when I finish it”。

× Actually, I'm a Senior High student. I don't have any jobs, but let's talk about the learning. For me, I always learn the the languages, but the languages need so many patients.

✓ Actually, I'm a Senior High student. I don't have any job, but let's talk about learning. For me, I always learn languages, but languages need so much patience.

“jobs”应为单数“job”，因为通常指一份工作。重复“the the”应去掉一个“the”。“the languages”改为“languages”更自然。不可数名词“patience”不能用“many”，应用“much”。

× Actually, I'm a Senior High student. I don't have any jobs, but let's talk about the learning. For me, I always learn the the languages, but the languages need so many patients.

✓ Actually, I'm a Senior High student. I don't have any job, but let's talk about learning. For me, I always learn languages, but languages need so much patience.

“patients”是“病人”的意思，错误地用来表示“耐心”，应改为“patience”。

× Yes, indeed. Uh, because, umm, I get some good, good, good grades, uh, during my learning process and uh, umm, I'm fall for patients and the confidence.

✓ Yes, indeed. Uh, because, umm, I got some good grades during my learning process and, umm, I fell for patience and confidence.

描述过去经历应使用过去时，“get”改为“got”，“I'm fall”结构错误，应为“I fell”。

× Yes, indeed. Uh, because, umm, I get some good, good, good grades, uh, during my learning process and uh, umm, I'm fall for patients and the confidence.

✓ Yes, indeed. Uh, because, umm, I got some good grades during my learning process and, umm, I fell for patience and confidence.

“patients”错误，应为“patience”，表示“耐心”。