耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is honest and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct in your sentence structure. For example, avoid repeating 'really' and clarify phrases like 'rush full person'.

示例: To be honest, I'm not a very patient person. I tend to rush things because I want to finish quickly and then relax.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to organise your ideas more logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words.

示例: I feel impatient because I want to complete tasks quickly to clear my mind and avoid forgetting them. When work is left unfinished, it makes me feel irritated and annoyed.

建议: Your answer is vague and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to express your feelings clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid filler words and be more specific about your experience.

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I find it boring rather than irritating. It feels a bit tedious, but I understand it's necessary.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and informal. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more precise in your description. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'like they are' without completing the thought.

示例: Yes, my job as a front desk officer requires a lot of patience because I often handle complaints from parents both over the phone and in person, which can be challenging.

建议: Your answer is somewhat disorganised and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly and avoid filler words. Use correct verb forms and be specific about your experiences.

示例: Honestly, as a child, I was patient because it wasn't often required. However, between the ages of 9 and 14, I was quite impatient and sometimes rude when things didn't go my way.

× I'm really impatient and I really rush full person.

✓ I'm really impatient and I really rush as a person.

The phrase 'rush full person' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'rush as a person' to describe the speaker's tendency to rush. The error is due to incorrect adjective/adverb usage.

× I just want things to be done quickly and then I can rest then.

✓ I just want things to be done quickly so that I can rest afterwards.

The use of 'then' twice is redundant and the preposition 'then' is incorrectly used. 'So that' and 'afterwards' better express the intended meaning.

× If you tell me something to do, I, I will try to do as soon as possible and then just rest or I'll just try to like get off things off my mind so I just won't forget, forget them later or uh, anything like that.

✓ If you tell me something to do, I will try to do it as soon as possible and then just rest or I'll try to get things off my mind so I won't forget them later or anything like that.

The pronoun 'it' is missing after 'do' to refer to the task. Also, 'get off things off my mind' is redundant; 'get things off my mind' is correct.

× I just feel irritated or you know, it's annoying when the work is hanging.

✓ I just feel irritated, you know, it's annoying when the work is pending.

The phrase 'work is hanging' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'work is pending' or 'work is unfinished'. The error is due to incorrect preposition and word choice.

× It feels OK, OK, OK, like it does not feel really good or it does not feel really bad because you know, you have to do this and this and this this time.

✓ It feels okay, not really good or bad because, you know, you have to do this and that during this time.

Repetition of 'OK' is unnecessary. 'This and this and this this time' is unclear; 'this and that during this time' is clearer. The error is in adjective/adverb usage and clarity.

× So yeah, it's not that irritating, but it's kind of, you know, uh, annoying kind of thing like you have, you have to boring kind of thing.

✓ So yeah, it's not that irritating, but it's kind of, you know, an annoying kind of thing, like you have to do something boring.

The phrase 'you have to boring kind of thing' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'you have to do something boring'. The error is incorrect adjective usage and sentence structure.

× My job is uh, front desk officer and a calling person.

✓ My job is, uh, a front desk officer and a call handler.

'Calling person' is not a correct noun phrase. 'Call handler' or 'person who handles calls' is appropriate. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'front desk officer'.

× So you just have to receive complaints from all the parents in call on the calls or in person.

✓ So you just have to receive complaints from all the parents on the calls or in person.

The phrase 'in call on the calls' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on the calls' to indicate during phone calls.

× And some parents or some customers are really, really annoying like they are.

✓ And some parents or some customers are really, really annoying, like they are.

The sentence is grammatically correct but incomplete. Adding a comma before 'like they are' improves clarity. No singular/plural error found here, so no correction needed.

× Honestly, when I was a child, umm, it did not required me to be patient.

✓ Honestly, when I was a child, umm, it did not require me to be patient.

After 'did not', the base form of the verb 'require' should be used, not the past tense 'required'. This is a common past tense error.

× But yes, I was patient.

✓ But yes, I was patient.

This sentence is correct. No correction needed.

× But uh, in the middle age like when I was 9 to 11 or 11 to 1314, I was really impatient.

✓ But uh, in middle age, like when I was 9 to 11 or 11 to 13 or 14, I was really impatient.

The phrase 'middle age' should not have 'the' before it in this context. Also, the numbers should be separated properly. The error is in article usage and clarity.

× Like I used to get rude when things did not go my way or go.

✓ Like I used to get rude when things did not go my way.

The phrase 'or go' is incomplete and unnecessary. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without it.