耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了耐心的概念，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法准确性。

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always try my best to help my friends when they have questions, no matter how long it takes.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法和用词错误，且内容重复。建议使用更简洁明了的句子，避免不必要的细节，确保表达逻辑清晰。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to repeat myself more than twice because it seems like the other person is not listening carefully.

建议: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够连贯，内容不够具体。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，明确表达感受，并提供具体例子。

示例: I am used to working on long-term tasks. For example, last semester I spent three months completing a project, which taught me patience and persistence.

建议: 回答中有许多犹豫词和重复，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用更简洁的句子，并具体说明为什么需要耐心。

示例: As a student, I definitely need patience because learning many new subjects in one semester requires continuous effort and review.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，简洁表达对比，并避免重复。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions instead of crying when I feel annoyed.

× I think I'm used to do a thing for a long time since for example like in last semester I have a project like I have to spend a whole semester which is 3 months to finish.

✓ I think I'm used to doing a thing for a long time since, for example, in last semester I had a project where I had to spend a whole semester, which is 3 months, to finish.

“used to”后面应接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。这里应使用“doing”而不是“do”。

× I think I'm used to do a thing for a long time since for example like in last semester I have a project like I have to spend a whole semester which is 3 months to finish.

✓ I think I'm used to doing a thing for a long time since, for example, in last semester I had a project where I had to spend a whole semester, which is 3 months, to finish.

描述过去的事情时，动词时态应使用过去时态。这里“have”应改为“had”，表示过去的项目。

× So I still think Lloyd is a hot subject but I still finish at the end.

✓ So I still think Lloyd is a hot subject but I still finished it in the end.

描述过去完成的动作时，动词应使用过去时态。这里“finish”应改为“finished”。

× I think I'm used to do a thing for a long time since for example like in last semester I have a project like I have to spend a whole semester which is 3 months to finish.

✓ I think I'm used to doing a thing for a long time since, for example, in last semester I had a project where I had to spend a whole semester, which is 3 months, to finish.

“in last semester”应使用介词“in”表示在某个学期内，表达正确。

× If I need to repeat one thing like more than three times and he will make me feel angry 'cause I think like if they ask me like for sex of sensing for the second time, I will try my best to answer in a simple way but they are still asking me for a third time.

✓ If I need to repeat one thing more than three times, it will make me feel angry because I think if they ask me for the second time, I will try my best to answer in a simple way but if they are still asking me for a third time, I will think they didn't listen to my answer.

句中“he”指代不明，应使用“it”或省略；“sex of sensing”疑为错误表达，应删除或改正。

× I think I am because if my friends have any issue or they when they ask me some question I will try my best to answer their question and to help them no matter how long will take it.

✓ I think I am because if my friends have any issue or when they ask me some questions, I will try my best to answer their questions and help them no matter how long it will take.

句子结构混乱，需调整词序和连接词，使句子通顺。

× If I need to repeat one thing like more than three times and he will make me feel angry 'cause I think like if they ask me like for sex of sensing for the second time, I will try my best to answer in a simple way but they are still asking me for a third time.

✓ If I need to repeat one thing more than three times, it will make me feel angry because I think if they ask me for the second time, I will try my best to answer in a simple way but if they are still asking me for a third time, I will think they didn't listen to my answer.

“he”指代错误，应使用“it”或省略；“they”指代复数，保持一致。

× You have to take some time to sit down and to re keep reviewing and starting new things.

✓ You have to take some time to sit down and keep reviewing and start new things.

“re keep reviewing”表达错误，应去掉“re”，并且“starting”应改为动词原形“start”与“keep reviewing”并列。

× I think so because when I was a child, I don't know how to express my, my feeling.

✓ I think so because when I was a child, I didn't know how to express my feelings.

时态错误，描述过去应使用过去时“didn't know”；“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，表示感受。

× Uh, so if something annoyed me, I can do did not sing but just cry.

✓ Uh, so if something annoyed me, I could not do anything but just cry.

“do did not sing”是错误表达，应为“could not do anything”；“sing”应为“anything”。

× But now I know how to be patient for deal for dealing something like that, like which is annoying me.

✓ But now I know how to be patient in dealing with something like that, which is annoying me.

“for deal for dealing”表达错误，应使用介词短语“in dealing with”表示处理某事。