耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu de, hanashikata mo sukoshi fukidashite imasu. Motto shizen de, tadashii bunpou to wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte, kotae o kanzen ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I am not very patient, but I try to be understanding when my friends make mistakes because I also make mistakes sometimes.' to iu fuu ni.

示例: I am not very patient, but I try to be understanding when my friends make mistakes because I also make mistakes sometimes.

建议: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, kotoba no erabi mo tadashiku arimasen. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba de setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I feel impatient when I have too many assignments because it makes me overwhelmed, and sometimes I lose my temper.' to iu fuu ni.

示例: I feel impatient when I have too many assignments because it makes me overwhelmed, and sometimes I lose my temper.

建议: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto shizen de, tadashii bunpou to wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte, kotae o kanzen ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I am curious about many things, but when I have to do something for a long time, I feel bored and want to quit.' to iu fuu ni.

示例: I am curious about many things, but when I have to do something for a long time, I feel bored and want to quit.

建议: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba de setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I have not worked yet, but I think my future job will require patience, so I try to be patient.' to iu fuu ni.

示例: I have not worked yet, but I think my future job will require patience, so I try to be patient.

建议: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba de setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I am more patient now because I have learned to understand people from different backgrounds and perspectives.' to iu fuu ni.

示例: Yes, I am more patient now because I have learned to understand people from different backgrounds and perspectives.

× even if my friends were somewhat mistake

✓ even if my friends made some mistakes

The phrase 'somewhat mistake' is incorrect because 'mistake' is a countable noun and should be pluralized as 'mistakes' when referring to more than one. Also, 'were' is not the correct verb here; 'made' is appropriate for actions in the past. Therefore, 'made some mistakes' is the correct form.

× even if my friends were somewhat mistake, uh, make a mistake

✓ even if my friends made some mistakes

The verb tense is inconsistent. 'Were' and 'make' do not agree in tense. The correct past tense form is 'made' to indicate completed actions in the past.

× there too much assignment or overwhelming

✓ there are too many assignments or it is overwhelming

'Assignment' is a countable noun and should be pluralized as 'assignments' when referring to multiple tasks. Also, 'too much' is used with uncountable nouns; for countable nouns, 'too many' is correct. Additionally, 'there' needs a verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× there too much assignment or overwhelming

✓ there are too many assignments or it is overwhelming

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' after 'there' which is necessary to form a correct 'there be' structure.

× I'm a strong curious about many things

✓ I'm very curious about many things

The phrase 'a strong curious' is incorrect because 'curious' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a' or 'strong'. Instead, use an adverb like 'very' to modify 'curious'.

× I yeah wanted to quit husband

✓ I wanted to quit halfway

The phrase 'quit husband' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended phrase is 'quit halfway' or 'give up halfway'. Also, 'yeah' is informal and unnecessary here.

× when it comes to UMM, when it comes to finding control for the year

✓ when it comes to finding control for the year

The repetition of 'when it comes to' is redundant. Also, 'UMM' seems to be a filler word and should be removed for clarity.

× I try to. Take a drop of the choir station

✓ I try to take a drop at the choir station

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Take a drop' is unclear; possibly 'take a break' or 'take a drop' is intended. Also, 'of the choir station' should be 'at the choir station' to indicate location.

× my umm, the way nothing has more

✓ my way has changed more

The phrase 'the way nothing has more' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Likely, the intended meaning is 'my way has changed more' or 'my perspective has changed'.