耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致和时态，避免重复。

示例: I am not very patient. It depends on the person. If I am close to or respect someone, I will be patient. But if I dislike someone, I tend to be impatient.

建议: 回答内容较为具体，但句子表达有语法错误，且缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”使表达更连贯。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to repeat myself because the other person forgets what I said. Also, I get impatient if I have to wait for someone who is always late.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和句型，避免重复，增加逻辑连接词。

示例: I don't mind doing something for a long time. In China, children often study for many hours. I have studied continuously from childhood to adulthood, so I am used to it.

建议: 回答内容较好，但表达略显口语化，且有语法错误。建议使用更正式的表达，注意冠词和词形变化。

示例: Yes, although I am still a student majoring in art at university. When I create my artwork, I have to paint repeatedly, so I need to be patient.

建议: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，影响理解。建议完整表达观点，注意句子结构和词汇使用。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now. When I was a child, I often quarreled with my parents over small things, but now I rarely do.

× Not really. It depends on who the object is.

✓ Not really. It depends on who the person is.

句子结构不正确，“who the object is”表达不清，应改为“who the person is”以符合语境。

× If is worth someone who I close to or I respect to I will be patient.

✓ If it is someone who I am close to or respect, I will be patient.

介词使用错误，'close to'和'respect'后不应加'to'，且缺少主语'it'，应补充完整。

× But if it if it was someone I hated not I will not.

✓ But if it was someone I hated, I would not be patient.

句子结构混乱，时态和语序错误，应调整为虚拟语气表达假设情况。

× if I tell something to someone repeatedly but he always forget it, I will be impatient.

✓ If I tell something to someone repeatedly but they always forget it, I will be impatient.

代词使用不当，'someone'对应的代词应为'they'以避免性别限定。

× And if I always wait for someone and he always be late, I will be impatient.

✓ And if I always wait for someone and he is always late, I will be impatient.

动词形式错误，'he always be late'应为'he is always late'，主谓一致。

× I think it doesn't matter and in China most of the children will do something for a long time like study.

✓ I think it doesn't matter, and in China most children will do something for a long time like studying.

冠词使用不当，'most of the children'改为'most children'更自然，'like study'应改为'like studying'。

× Uh when I was a child until I was a adult I was always study.

✓ When I was a child until I was an adult, I was always studying.

时态错误，'was always study'应为过去进行时'was always studying'。

× So I've seen it doesn't matter.

✓ So I've seen that it doesn't matter.

句子缺少连接词，'I've seen it doesn't matter'应加'that'使句子完整。

× I major in artist in university.

✓ I major in art at university.

介词使用错误，'major in artist'应为'major in art'，'in university'应为'at university'。

× When I need to create my works, I should paint again and again, so I must be patient.

✓ When I need to create my works, I have to paint again and again, so I must be patient.

情态动词使用不当，'should'改为更合适的'obligation'表达'have to'。

× Yes, I think I am more passionate now.

✓ Yes, I think I am more patient now.

语义错误，题目问耐心，'passionate'（热情）应改为'patient'（耐心）。

× When I was a child, I always quarreled with my parents because of some details, but now when I almost not called with an.

✓ When I was a child, I always quarreled with my parents because of some details, but now I almost never quarrel with them.

动词和表达错误，'almost not called with an'不合语法，应改为'almost never quarrel with them'。