机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“close the opener”和“go to relax on the back scrolling”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免重复和口头语。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it makes doing laundry much easier. After a busy day, I simply put all my dirty clothes into the machine, start it, and then relax while it works.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容不够具体。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并提供具体原因或例子。

示例: Absolutely. Washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. Without them, daily chores would be much harder and more tiring.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“more easier”应为“easier”，且最后一句“prefer to see some research”表达不清。建议用更准确的表达，并避免模糊的词汇。

示例: I usually prefer watching video instructions instead of reading paper manuals because videos are easier to understand. Sometimes, written instructions can be boring and confusing for me.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法，并举具体例子说明重要性。

示例: Of course, I think reading instructions is very important before using a machine. This is especially true for elderly family members who may need clear guidance to operate the machine safely.

× I like washing machine because it's very convenient for me to do the housework.

✓ I like the washing machine because it's very convenient for me to do the housework.

这里缺少冠词“the”，因为“washing machine”是特指家里的洗衣机，应该用定冠词。

× I like washing machine because it's very convenient for me to do the housework.

✓ I like the washing machine because it's very convenient for me to do the housework.

“washing machine”前面需要加定冠词“the”，表示特指家里的洗衣机。

× I directly put all The Dirty clothes into the washing machine and I just close the, uh, opener and then I just, uh, go to relax on the back scrolling.

✓ I directly put all the dirty clothes into the washing machine and I just close the, uh, opener and then I just, uh, go to relax on the back scrolling.

“The Dirty clothes”中的“The”不应大写，且“dirty”应小写，且“the”用来特指这些脏衣服。

× I directly put all The Dirty clothes into the washing machine and I just close the, uh, opener and then I just, uh, go to relax on the back scrolling.

✓ I directly put all the dirty clothes into the washing machine and I just close the, uh, opener and then I just, uh, go to relax on the back porch.

“back scrolling”应为“back porch”，这里是表达“后院的门廊”，原词拼写错误。

× I just close the, uh, opener and then I just, uh, go to relax on the back scrolling.

✓ I just close the, uh, opener and then I just, uh, go to relax on the back porch.

“scrolling”拼写错误，应为“porch”，表示“门廊”。

× I think the technology is served for our human beings.

✓ I think technology serves human beings.

“the technology”不需要定冠词，且“is served for”用法错误，应改为主动语态“serves”。

× For example, I could imagine if one day there's no any machines, maybe it's not very convenient for me.

✓ For example, I could imagine if one day there are no machines, maybe it wouldn't be very convenient for me.

“no any machines”用法错误，应为“no machines”；“there's”应改为复数形式“there are”；时态和语气也需调整。

× I could die, to be honest, because I think I'm such.

✓ I might die, to be honest, because I think I'm like that.

“could die”表达可能性更合适用“might die”；“I'm such”不完整，应补充为“I'm like that”。

× I prefer to watch video instructions rather than reading the physical paper instructions because it's way more easier for me I think.

✓ I prefer to watch video instructions rather than read the physical paper instructions because it's much easier for me, I think.

“more easier”是双重比较，应改为“easier”；“reading”应改为“read”与“prefer to”搭配。

× Sometimes I read some scripts on the paper, it's very boring and I couldn't understand them at all.

✓ Sometimes I read some scripts on paper; it's very boring and I can't understand them at all.

“on the paper”应为“on paper”；时态应统一，不能前后混用过去时和现在时。

× I prefer to see some research.

✓ I prefer to watch some videos.

“see some research”表达不准确，应该是“watch some videos”更符合上下文。

× Of course, I think instructions are the must have before we buy the machine because there are different ages people they will use the machine.

✓ Of course, I think instructions are a must-have before we buy the machine because people of different ages will use the machine.

“the must have”用法错误，应为“a must-have”；“different ages people”应改为“people of different ages”；“they will use”重复主语，应删去“they”。

× If they couldn't give us the instructions, maybe they.

✓ If they couldn't understand the instructions, maybe they would have problems using the machine.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。