机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: My favourite machine at home is my robot vacuum cleaner. I can start it before I come back from work, so the house is clean when I arrive. This saves me a lot of time and effort, allowing me to relax. Overall, it makes my daily life much easier and more comfortable.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to make your points flow better and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are essential for maintaining hygiene at home. They save time because you can operate them and focus on other tasks simultaneously. Therefore, these machines greatly contribute to our well-being and convenience.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid informal expressions like 'older 1'.

示例: If the machine is new to me, I always read the instructions to understand its settings and operation. However, for machines I have used before, I usually skip the instructions to save time and start using them immediately.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more concisely and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Absolutely, reading instructions is important because it ensures you use the machine correctly and select the appropriate settings. Otherwise, incorrect use might damage the machine's functions.

× My favorite machine at home is my robot over that makes my life so easy because I can put it on before I come home from work and I find the place clean and whole world and that gives me so much free time.

✓ My favorite machine at home is my robot over there that makes my life so easy because I can put it on before I come home from work and I find the place clean and the whole world, and that gives me so much free time.

The phrase 'my robot over that' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'over there' to indicate location. Also, 'whole world' needs the definite article 'the' to specify it. Proper use of prepositions and articles improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, these machines are super important for well-being especially for the hygiene and as well are very common because you can put it on and you don't care for the clothes because they will be clean and meantime you can do other things.

✓ Yes, these machines are super important for well-being, especially for hygiene, and are also very common because you can put them on and you don't have to care for the clothes because they will be clean, and in the meantime you can do other things.

The phrase 'care for the clothes' is better expressed as 'have to care for the clothes' to indicate obligation. Also, 'meantime' should be preceded by 'in the' to form the correct phrase 'in the meantime'. Additionally, 'as well are very common' is better as 'and are also very common' for smoother conjunction use.

× Yes, these machines are super important for well-being especially for the hygiene and as well are very common because you can put it on and you don't care for the clothes because they will be clean and meantime you can do other things.

✓ Yes, these machines are super important for well-being, especially for hygiene, and are also very common because you can put them on and you don't have to care for the clothes because they will be clean, and in the meantime you can do other things.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'machines' which is plural; it should be 'them' to agree in number. Maintaining singular/plural agreement between nouns and pronouns is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× If it's a new machine which I never used, of course I need to read instruction to understand the setting and how to use it.

✓ If it's a new machine which I have never used, of course I need to read the instructions to understand the settings and how to use it.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'the' is needed before 'instructions' to specify particular instructions. Additionally, 'setting' should be plural 'settings' as machines often have multiple settings. The verb tense 'never used' should be 'have never used' to correctly express present perfect tense.

× If it's a new machine which I never used, of course I need to read instruction to understand the setting and how to use it.

✓ If it's a new machine which I have never used, of course I need to read the instructions to understand the settings and how to use it.

The phrase 'I never used' is incorrect in this context; the present perfect 'I have never used' is appropriate to indicate experience up to now. This tense is used to express actions that have relevance to the present.

× But if it's older 1 and I already know, I don't need to open the instruction because I know how it works and it saves me time and I just put it to work immediately.

✓ But if it's an older one and I already know, I don't need to open the instructions because I know how it works and it saves me time and I just put it to work immediately.

The numeral '1' should be written as 'one' in this context. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. Using the correct form improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But if it's older 1 and I already know, I don't need to open the instruction because I know how it works and it saves me time and I just put it to work immediately.

✓ But if it's an older one and I already know, I don't need to open the instructions because I know how it works and it saves me time and I just put it to work immediately.

The phrase 'open the instruction' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'open the instructions' because instructions are usually plural and 'open' is used with documents or manuals. This correction ensures proper collocation and usage.

× Absolutely, it's important to read the instructions because that can help you to use the machine properly and in the right settings for the right tasks.

✓ Absolutely, it's important to read the instructions because that can help you use the machine properly and in the right settings for the right tasks.

The phrase 'help you to use' is grammatically correct but more natural and common in English is 'help you use' without 'to'. This improves fluency and naturalness of the sentence.

× Otherwise you can use, you can use in the the wrong way and that can damage the the function of the machine.

✓ Otherwise, you can use it in the wrong way and that can damage the function of the machine.

The sentence has repeated words 'you can use, you can use' and repeated 'the the'. Also, 'use' needs an object, so 'it' is added. Removing repetitions and adding the object pronoun corrects the sentence structure and article usage.