机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，且表达略显重复。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，并避免重复表达相同意思。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer months. It is very useful and plays an important role in my daily life.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it can help me save many time”应为“they can help me save a lot of time”，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意主谓一致和使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they can help me save a lot of time when doing housework, and they also keep my home clean.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，且表达不够简洁。建议注意动词形式并简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions, especially when I buy a new machine, because it helps me avoid accidents like fires.

建议: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“may be effective some accident”应为“may cause some accidents”。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构的正确性。

示例: Yes, I think it is very important for everyone to read the instructions because not knowing how to use a machine properly may cause accidents, which can be very dangerous.

× For myself, I really like air conditioner because it can helps me avoid some hot temperature in the summer months.

✓ For myself, I really like the air conditioner because it can help me avoid some hot temperature in the summer months.

动词help在第三人称单数时不加s，因为can后面接动词原形。这里的helps是错误的。

× For myself, I really like air conditioner because it can helps me avoid some hot temperature in the summer months.

✓ For myself, I really like the air conditioner because it can help me avoid some hot temperature in the summer months.

air conditioner前缺少定冠词the，因为这里指的是特定的家用空调。

× Yes, I think they are very valued because it can help me save many time to do my housework and it also can make my home clean.

✓ Yes, I think they are very valuable because they can help me save a lot of time doing my housework and they can also make my home clean.

主语they是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式can help而不是it can help。

× Yes, I think they are very valued because it can help me save many time to do my housework and it also can make my home clean.

✓ Yes, I think they are very valuable because they can help me save a lot of time doing my housework and they can also make my home clean.

time是不可数名词，不能用many修饰，应使用a lot of或much。

× Yes, I think they are very valued because it can help me save many time to do my housework and it also can make my home clean.

✓ Yes, I think they are very valuable because they can help me save a lot of time doing my housework and they can also make my home clean.

动词save后面接doing housework更自然，表示节省做家务的时间。

× Oh yes, I always read the instructions especially I bought a new machine because I think it is really important for everyone. It can helps me to avoid some accident like fire.

✓ Oh yes, I always read the instructions especially when I buy a new machine because I think it is really important for everyone. It can help me avoid some accidents like fire.

can后面动词用原形help，不加s。

× Oh yes, I always read the instructions especially I bought a new machine because I think it is really important for everyone. It can helps me to avoid some accident like fire.

✓ Oh yes, I always read the instructions especially when I buy a new machine because I think it is really important for everyone. It can help me avoid some accidents like fire.

avoid后面直接接名词，不用to。

× Oh yes, I always read the instructions especially I bought a new machine because I think it is really important for everyone.

✓ Oh yes, I always read the instructions especially when I buy a new machine because I think it is really important for everyone.

句子描述习惯动作，时态应为一般现在时，bought改为buy。

× It can helps me to avoid some accident like fire.

✓ It can help me avoid some accidents like fire.

accident应使用复数形式accidents，表示多种可能的事故。

× Oh yes, I think it's very significant for everyone because if you don't know how to use your machine, it may be effective some accident.

✓ Oh yes, I think it's very significant for everyone because if you don't know how to use your machine, it may cause some accidents.

effective是形容词，不能用作动词。此处应使用动词cause表示“引起”。

× Oh yes, I think it's very significant for everyone because if you don't know how to use your machine, it may be effective some accident.

✓ Oh yes, I think it's very significant for everyone because if you don't know how to use your machine, it may cause some accidents.

accident应使用复数形式accidents，表示多种可能的事故。