机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为简单，缺乏具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议增加具体使用电脑的例子，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I use it for various tasks such as studying, watching movies, and communicating with friends. Moreover, it helps me stay organized and productive.

建议: 回答中出现了语法错误和不自然的表达，且缺少具体细节。建议避免拼写错误，使用更准确的表达，并举例说明它们的重要性。

示例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save us a lot of time and effort. For example, a washing machine can clean clothes quickly, allowing us to focus on other activities.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇如'instructions'，并简洁明了地说明原因。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to understand how it works and to avoid any mistakes. This helps me use the machine safely and effectively.

建议: 回答表达不够自然，语法和词汇使用有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并说明阅读说明书的重要性。

示例: Yes, reading the instructions is very important because it helps prevent misuse of the machine, which can lead to damage or accidents.

× Yes, e-mail opinion.

✓ Yes, in my opinion.

这里的'e-mail opinion'是错误的表达，正确的短语是'in my opinion'，表示“在我看来”。这是代词和短语的错误使用。

× If you don't read the instructions you will maybe use them in wrong way and they may be broken.

✓ If you don't read the instructions, you may use them in the wrong way and they may be broken.

短语'in wrong way'缺少定冠词'the'，正确表达是'in the wrong way'。此外，'will maybe use'的词序不正确，应该是'may use'。这是介词和副词位置的错误。

× If you don't read the instructions you will maybe use them in wrong way and they may be broken.

✓ If you don't read the instructions, you may use them in the wrong way and they may be broken.

'maybe'是副词，不能放在助动词和动词之间，正确用法是'may use'。这是副词位置错误。

× Yes, before I use them, I should know how to use them and know some special function, so I will read the introductions.

✓ Yes, before I use them, I should know how to use them and know some special functions, so I will read the instructions.

'some special function'应为复数形式'some special functions'，'introductions'应为'instructions'，表示“说明书”。这是代词和名词使用错误。