机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯且内容不完整。建议直接回答问题，避免无关内容，并补充具体原因。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry.

建议: 回答较为完整，但缺少连贯的连接词，且表达稍显重复。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并避免重复。

示例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time, allowing me to focus on activities like reading and exercising.

建议: 回答内容较简单，存在语法和用词错误。建议使用更准确的表达，并简洁明了地说明理由。

示例: Actually, I usually don't read the instructions because most machines are easy to operate by simply turning them on and off.

建议: 回答表达不够清晰，有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions first because using a machine incorrectly can cause damage and reduce its lifespan.

× Yeah, when you eat dinner after dinner.

✓ Yeah, after you eat dinner.

这里的句子结构不正确，'when you eat dinner after dinner'重复且不合逻辑，应该简化为'after you eat dinner'，表示在吃完晚饭之后。

× I think if I live without this kind of machine, I will take a lot of wasted time.

✓ I think if I live without these kinds of machines, I will waste a lot of time.

'this kind of machine'指单数，但后文表达的是多种机器，应该用复数形式'these kinds of machines'，同时'waste time'是固定搭配，不能用'take a lot of wasted time'。

× I need to do some readings and exercising.

✓ I need to do some reading and exercise.

'reading'和'exercise'作为不可数名词时不加复数形式，'readings'和'exercising'用法不当，应改为'reading'和'exercise'。

× It's just you switch the open and off, on and off, then the machine start to work and that's all.

✓ It's just you switch it on and off, then the machine starts to work and that's all.

'switch the open and off'表达错误，正确用法是'switch it on and off'；'machine start'主谓不一致，第三人称单数应为'starts'。

× then the machine start to work and that's all.

✓ then the machine starts to work and that's all.

主语'the machine'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为'starts'。

× You don't need to read the instruments, yes.

✓ You don't need to read the instructions, yes.

'instruments'（仪器）与上下文不符，正确词应为'instructions'（说明书）。

× So you may just breathe the instructions 1st and protect the machine and make sure the machine can use a long time and make sure it's it will not broken.

✓ So you may just read the instructions first to protect the machine and make sure the machine can be used for a long time and make sure it will not break.

'breathe the instructions'错误，应为'read the instructions'；'1st'应写为'first'；'make sure the machine can use a long time'表达不当，应为'make sure the machine can be used for a long time'；'make sure it's it will not broken'语法错误，应为'make sure it will not break'。