机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，词汇使用不准确，建议简化句子结构，明确表达喜欢的家用机器及其功能。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps food and fruits fresh for a long time, which makes our life more convenient.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，准确表达观点。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort by cleaning clothes and floors automatically.

建议: 回答表达不完整，语法错误较多，建议完整表达原因并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions because they help me understand the machine's functions and use it more effectively.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，建议简洁表达，注意主谓一致，使用连接词增强逻辑性。

示例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps me use the machine correctly, avoid problems, save time, and ensure safety.

× I think I reckon that it would be refugee there, which helps my family to keep food and fruits always be fresh and this really helps people's life become more convenient because we people always get get these things cannot be eaten by.

✓ I think I reckon that it would be a refrigerator there, which helps my family keep food and fruits always fresh, and this really helps people's lives become more convenient because we people always get these things that cannot be eaten otherwise.

句中缺少冠词“a”，且“refugee”应为“refrigerator”，另外“keep food and fruits always be fresh”结构不正确，应为“keep food and fruits always fresh”。“people's life”应为复数“people's lives”，且句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I think I reckon that it would be refugee there, which helps my family to keep food and fruits always be fresh and this really helps people's life become more convenient because we people always get get these things cannot be eaten by.

✓ I think I reckon that it would be a refrigerator there, which helps my family keep food and fruits always fresh, and this really helps people's lives become more convenient because we people always get these things that cannot be eaten otherwise.

“fruits”在此处用复数是正确的，但“people's life”应为复数“people's lives”，因为指的是多个人的生活。

× I think I reckon that it would be refugee there, which helps my family to keep food and fruits always be fresh and this really helps people's life become more convenient because we people always get get these things cannot be eaten by.

✓ I think I reckon that it would be a refrigerator there, which helps my family keep food and fruits always fresh, and this really helps people's lives become more convenient because we people always get these things that cannot be eaten otherwise.

“always be fresh”中“be”不应使用原形，应改为形容词“fresh”直接修饰名词。

× Yes, I think these things are important because washing machines helps people to wash their clothes by machine instead of their hand hands and spa machine keeps the home and and trashes can be automatically be cleaned.

✓ Yes, I think these things are important because washing machines help people to wash their clothes by machine instead of by hand, and the spa machine keeps the home clean and trash can be automatically cleaned.

“washing machines helps”中“machines”是复数，谓语动词应为“help”。“hand hands”重复且错误，应为“by hand”。“trashes”应为不可数名词“trash”。

× Yes, I think these things are important because washing machines helps people to wash their clothes by machine instead of their hand hands and spa machine keeps the home and and trashes can be automatically be cleaned.

✓ Yes, I think these things are important because washing machines help people to wash their clothes by machine instead of by hand, and the spa machine keeps the home clean and trash can be automatically cleaned.

主语“washing machines”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“help”，而非“helps”。

× Yes, I think these things are important because washing machines helps people to wash their clothes by machine instead of their hand hands and spa machine keeps the home and and trashes can be automatically be cleaned.

✓ Yes, I think these things are important because washing machines help people to wash their clothes by machine instead of by hand, and the spa machine keeps the home clean and trash can be automatically cleaned.

“instead of their hand hands”中“their hand hands”错误，应为“by hand”，表示用手洗衣服。

× Yes, I do, because from the instructions I know the function of the machine and how to use it more effectively. If not is without an instruction, I think the most function can be not found completely and.

✓ Yes, I do, because from the instructions I know the functions of the machine and how to use it more effectively. If there is no instruction, I think most functions cannot be found completely.

“the function”应为复数“the functions”，因为机器通常有多个功能。

× Yes, I do, because from the instructions I know the function of the machine and how to use it more effectively. If not is without an instruction, I think the most function can be not found completely and.

✓ Yes, I do, because from the instructions I know the functions of the machine and how to use it more effectively. If there is no instruction, I think most functions cannot be found completely.

“If not is without an instruction”结构不正确，应改为“If there is no instruction”。句尾“and”无后续内容，应删除。

× Yes, I think it's important because because with instruction I can find some important features or use this machine correctly which will avoid some problems and it will helps me to save my time and ensure using safety.

✓ Yes, I think it's important because with instructions I can find some important features or use this machine correctly, which will avoid some problems and help me save time and ensure safety.

“with instruction”应为复数“with instructions”，表示多条说明。

× Yes, I think it's important because because with instruction I can find some important features or use this machine correctly which will avoid some problems and it will helps me to save my time and ensure using safety.

✓ Yes, I think it's important because with instructions I can find some important features or use this machine correctly, which will avoid some problems and help me save time and ensure safety.

“it will helps”中“helps”应为原形“help”，因为助动词“will”后动词用原形。

× Yes, I think it's important because because with instruction I can find some important features or use this machine correctly which will avoid some problems and it will helps me to save my time and ensure using safety.

✓ Yes, I think it's important because with instructions I can find some important features or use this machine correctly, which will avoid some problems and help me save time and ensure safety.

“ensure using safety”表达不正确，应为“ensure safety”，即确保安全。