机器— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
So basically my home has well furnished equipment so I would opt for washing machine as my go to since the convenient and safe my budget so I do not have to go to the laundry to wash my clothes. Yeah.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Well, actually I reckon that both washing machines and sweeping machines play a crucial role in our daily life. These high tech devices help people save a considerable amount of money and effort, especially for busy families. For example, washing machines make cleaning clothes much faster.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Well actually yes, well before utilizing a high tech machine, especially when it comes to sweeping machine reading the instruction play who's a role determining the equip that machine require.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Well, actually I have to say yes. Reading the instructions before utilizing it is like playing a crucial role in our life since we can acknowledge the way we can use it and avoid mistakes.
评估
总分
语法
× So basically my home has well furnished equipment so I would opt for washing machine as my go to since the convenient and safe my budget so I do not have to go to the laundry to wash my clothes. Yeah.
✓ So basically my home has well-furnished equipment, so I would opt for the washing machine as my go-to since it is convenient and fits my budget, so I do not have to go to the laundry to wash my clothes.
The original sentence has issues with missing articles and incorrect quantifiers such as 'the convenient' and 'safe my budget'. The phrase 'the convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'it is convenient'. Also, 'safe my budget' is unclear and should be 'fits my budget'. Adding 'the' before 'washing machine' is necessary because it refers to a specific machine in the home. The sentence also needs commas to separate clauses for clarity.
× Well actually yes, well before utilizing a high tech machine, especially when it comes to sweeping machine reading the instruction play who's a role determining the equip that machine require.
✓ Well, actually yes. Before utilizing a high-tech machine, especially when it comes to a sweeping machine, reading the instructions plays a crucial role in determining the equipment that the machine requires.
The original sentence has pronoun errors such as 'who's a role' which is incorrect; it should be 'plays a crucial role'. Also, 'reading the instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The phrase 'determining the equip that machine require' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'determining the equipment that the machine requires'. Proper articles and verb agreement are necessary here.
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