机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu để tránh lan man. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the microwave. It is very convenient because it heats food quickly. For example, I can warm up my meals in just a few minutes. This saves me a lot of time, especially when I am busy. Therefore, I use it almost every day.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng (ví dụ: 'sweeping machines' nên là 'vacuum cleaners'). Câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh và có kết luận rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: I don't have a washing machine or a vacuum cleaner at home because I usually do the housework myself. However, I think these machines are very important for most people because they make cleaning easier and save time. If I had them, my daily routine would be much more efficient and less tiring.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lộn xộn và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using machines because my dad usually does it for me. He teaches me how to use them instead. Sometimes, the instructions are too detailed and hard to understand.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

示例: I think it is very important to read the instructions because they help you understand how to use the product properly and avoid mistakes. For example, if you don't read them, you might connect parts incorrectly and damage the machine. Also, if you find the instructions difficult, you can ask someone who has read them to explain.

× For example, cookers for cooking cook rice, the stove for preparing meals, the microwave to quickly to quick heating food.

✓ For example, cookers for cooking rice, the stove for preparing meals, and the microwave for quickly heating food.

The phrase 'cooking cook rice' is redundant; 'cooking rice' is correct. Also, 'to quickly to quick heating food' is incorrect; it should be 'for quickly heating food' to properly express purpose and use the correct form of the verb.

× However, my favorite machine says microwave because it's very convenient and save me a lot of time.

✓ However, my favorite machine is the microwave because it's very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

The verb 'says' is incorrectly used instead of 'is' to identify the favorite machine. Also, 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Well, in my home I don't have washing machines or sleeping machines because I usually do almost the housework in my home.

✓ Well, in my home I don't have washing machines or sweeping machines because I usually do almost all the housework myself.

The word 'sleeping machines' is a typo and should be 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'almost the housework' is incorrect; it should be 'almost all the housework' to correctly quantify the amount of work done.

× However, I think those washing machines or sweeping machines are quite important for most people because they have their housework more convenient and save a lot of time.

✓ However, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are quite important for most people because they make their housework more convenient and save a lot of time.

The phrase 'they have their housework more convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'they make their housework more convenient' to correctly express causation. Also, 'those' is unnecessary here.

× If I have them, I believe my daily routine will be.

✓ If I had them, I believe my daily routine would be easier.

The sentence is incomplete and uses incorrect tense for a hypothetical situation. The correct form is the second conditional: 'If I had them' and 'would be'. Also, adding 'easier' completes the thought.

× Usually I don't read the instruction before the using magazines or the machines because usually that those my dad will do it and they will teach me how to use the machines more than reading the instruction will have which have many different details that difficult to understand.

✓ Usually, I don't read the instructions before using machines or magazines because my dad usually does it and teaches me how to use the machines rather than me reading the instructions, which have many details that are difficult to understand.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'the instruction' should be plural 'instructions'; 'before the using magazines' is incorrect, should be 'before using machines or magazines'; 'that those my dad' is incorrect, should be 'my dad'; 'more than reading the instruction will have' is awkward and incorrect, rephrased for clarity; 'which have many different details that difficult to understand' needs 'are' before 'difficult'.

× Well, I think it's very important to read the instruction because they help you understand how that product properly and avoid making mistake.

✓ Well, I think it's very important to read the instructions because they help you understand how to use the product properly and avoid making mistakes.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The phrase 'how that product properly' is incorrect; it should be 'how to use the product properly'. 'Making mistake' should be plural 'making mistakes'.

× For example, if you don't read instruction, you might connecting things correctly incorrectly and damage the items.

✓ For example, if you don't read the instructions, you might connect things incorrectly and damage the items.

'Read instruction' should be 'read the instructions'. 'Might connecting' is incorrect; modal verb 'might' should be followed by base verb 'connect'. 'Correctly incorrectly' is contradictory; 'incorrectly' is the intended adverb.

× However, if someone read that, you can also ask them to explain to you.

✓ However, if someone has read that, you can also ask them to explain it to you.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'has read' to indicate completed action. 'Explain to you' is better as 'explain it to you' to specify what is being explained.