机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, for example, say 'mixer' instead of 'Mixi'.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the mixer, which I use often to make shakes. Because I exercise regularly, I like to prepare healthy drinks like banana or chocolate shakes to regain energy quickly.

建议: Your answer covers the main idea but has some confusion and grammatical mistakes. For example, you mentioned 'sewing machines' instead of 'sweeping machines'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and keep sentences clear and concise. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'done in a party'.

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. If we wash clothes or clean floors manually, it takes much longer, but these machines make the tasks efficient and easy.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and avoid repetition. Also, clarify your points with complete sentences.

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For example, I recently bought a front-loading washing machine, which I had never used before, so I carefully read the manual to understand how to operate it.

建议: Your answer has good points but is unclear due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your thoughts logically. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because it helps us understand how the machine works and which buttons to use. Also, it prevents us from doing things that might damage the machine.

× My favorite machine in my home is Mixi or you can say juicer because I do a lot of exercise and after exercise I prefer taking a shake such as banana shake or chocolate shake to get some energy and I use it more frequently.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is Mixi or you can say juicer because I do a lot of exercises and after exercise I prefer taking a shake such as banana shake or chocolate shake to get some energy and I use it more frequently.

The word 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' when referring to multiple instances of physical activity. Using plural form here is appropriate because the speaker does many exercises, not just one.

× That's why it's.

✓ That's why I use it frequently.

The sentence 'That's why it's.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a verb and object to complete the thought. Adding 'I use it frequently' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sewing machines are important because they help in our daily task, in washing clothes and in cleaning floor and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort and by using them it the process become efficient and done in a party.

✓ Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help in our daily tasks, in washing clothes and in cleaning floors, and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort, and by using them the process becomes efficient and done in a party.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple daily activities. Also, 'floor' should be plural 'floors' to indicate general cleaning. Additionally, 'become' should be 'becomes' to agree with singular subject 'process'.

× Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sewing machines are important because they help in our daily task, in washing clothes and in cleaning floor and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort and by using them it the process become efficient and done in a party.

✓ Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help with our daily tasks, in washing clothes and in cleaning floors, and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort, and by using them the process becomes efficient and done in a party.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'our daily task'. The correct preposition is 'with' when referring to assistance or help in tasks. Also, 'in cleaning floor' should be 'in cleaning floors' or 'with cleaning floors'.

× Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sewing machines are important because they help in our daily task, in washing clothes and in cleaning floor and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort and by using them it the process become efficient and done in a party.

✓ Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help with our daily tasks, in washing clothes and in cleaning floors, and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort, and by using them the process becomes efficient and done in a party.

The phrase 'it the process become efficient' is incorrect. It should be 'the process becomes efficient' to correctly refer to the process and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sewing machines are important because they help in our daily task, in washing clothes and in cleaning floor and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort and by using them it the process become efficient and done in a party.

✓ Yes, I personally believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help with our daily tasks, in washing clothes and in cleaning floors, and if we do these things manually it will take a lot of time and effort, and by using them the process becomes efficient and done properly.

The phrase 'done in a party' is incorrect and unclear. The correct adverb is 'properly' to indicate that the task is done well or efficiently.

× Yes, I personally do read.

✓ Yes, I personally do read the instructions.

The sentence 'Yes, I personally do read.' is incomplete and lacks the object. Adding 'the instructions' completes the sentence and clarifies what is being read.

× For an example in in the recent days I purchased a washing machine and it was front loop and I have never used such machine earlier so I need to go through.

✓ For example, in recent days I purchased a washing machine and it was front load and I had never used such a machine before, so I needed to go through the instructions.

The phrase 'For an example in in the recent days' is incorrect. It should be 'For example, in recent days'. Also, 'front loop' is incorrect; the correct term is 'front load'. 'Have never used' should be 'had never used' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Such machine' should be 'such a machine'. 'Need to go through' should be 'needed to go through' to maintain past tense.

× For an example in in the recent days I purchased a washing machine and it was front loop and I have never used such machine earlier so I need to go through.

✓ For example, in recent days I purchased a washing machine and it was front load and I had never used such a machine before, so I needed to go through the instructions.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Have never used' should be 'had never used' and 'need to go through' should be 'needed to go through' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, it is important to read the instruction as it give the overall idea how the machine performs and by what buttons or process the at the at particular input the output will you get and it also helps you to avoid or doing things which can harm the machine.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions as it gives the overall idea of how the machine performs and by what buttons or process at a particular input the output you will get, and it also helps you to avoid doing things which can harm the machine.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'the at the at particular input' is incorrect; it should be 'at a particular input'. Also, 'avoid or doing things' should be 'avoid doing things'.

× Yes, it is important to read the instruction as it give the overall idea how the machine performs and by what buttons or process the at the at particular input the output will you get and it also helps you to avoid or doing things which can harm the machine.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions as it gives the overall idea of how the machine performs and by what buttons or process, at a particular input, you will get the output, and it also helps you to avoid doing things which can harm the machine.

The word order in 'the output will you get' is incorrect. The correct order is 'you will get the output'. Also, adding commas improves clarity.