机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“do me so many favors”应为“does me so many favors”，“suffer in the Internet”应为“surf the Internet”。建议注意动词时态和词汇的准确使用，同时避免重复表达。

示例: My favourite machine at home is my computer because it helps me with many tasks. For example, I use it to write papers and surf the Internet. Moreover, I communicate with my friends through social media on it. Therefore, my computer is very important to me.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“help our to improve our the our life quality”不通顺。建议简化句子结构，注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time on housework. This convenience improves our quality of life, allowing us to have more free time to relax and reduce stress.

建议: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误，如“before you using”应为“before you use”，且有口语填充词“uh”。建议注意语法准确性，避免口语填充词，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I think reading the instructions before using a machine is very important because it helps us save time and effort. For example, before using a washing machine, we should read the instructions to learn how to select the right mode for different types of clothes.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“help us in avoid mistakes”应为“help us avoid mistakes”，“we need to rate the instruction”应为“we need to read the instructions”。建议注意动词形式和词汇准确性，避免重复表达。

示例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because it helps us avoid mistakes and use machines more efficiently. For example, when using a washing machine, reading the instructions helps us choose the appropriate mode for different clothes to clean them properly and prevent damage.

× There must be my computer because it do me so many favors.

✓ There must be my computer because it does me so many favors.

主语是单数第三人称"it"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"does"，而不是"do"。

× For example, computer help me to write some papers and I can suffer in the Internet on my computer.

✓ For example, the computer helps me to write some papers and I can surf on the Internet on my computer.

"computer"是单数第三人称，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"helps"。另外，"suffer"用错，应为"surf"，表示上网。

× I can suffer in the Internet on my computer.

✓ I can surf on the Internet on my computer.

动词"surf"后应接介词"on"，表示"在网上浏览"，而不是"in"。

× What's more, I can use it to communicate with my friends on the social medias.

✓ What's more, I can use it to communicate with my friends on social media.

"social media"是不可数名词，不需要加复数形式"medias"。

× So I my favorite machine is my computer.

✓ So my favorite machine is my computer.

句子中"I"多余，应删除以保证句子结构完整。

× Yes, I think they are really important because they really reduce our time in the housework and it's really convenient to help our to improve our the our life quality so we can have much more spare time to relax and reduce our stress.

✓ Yes, I think they are really important because they really reduce the time we spend on housework and it's really convenient to help us improve our life quality so we can have much more spare time to relax and reduce our stress.

"reduce our time in the housework"表达不准确，应改为"reduce the time we spend on housework"。"help our to improve our the our life quality"中"our"和"the our"多余且错误，应改为"help us improve our life quality"。

× Yes, I think reading the instruction before using a machine is really necessary because it can help us to save the effort and time in, uh, using this machine.

✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions before using a machine is really necessary because it can help us save effort and time when using this machine.

"instruction"应为复数形式"instructions"，表示说明书。"save the effort and time"中"the"不必要，应去掉。

× For example, before you using the washing machine, you need to read the instruction first to know how to choose the right mode for different kinds of clothes to wash.

✓ For example, before you use the washing machine, you need to read the instructions first to know how to choose the right mode for different kinds of clothes to wash.

"before you using"结构错误，应为"before you use"。"instruction"应为复数形式"instructions"。

× Yes, I suggest that it's really important to help us in avoid mistakes and improve our efficiency in using machines.

✓ Yes, I suggest that it's really important to help us avoid mistakes and improve our efficiency in using machines.

"help us in avoid"结构错误，应为"help us avoid"，动词不定式前不加介词"in"。

× For example, when we using the washing machine, we need to rate the instruction to know how to choose the right the appropriate mode for different types of clothes to clean them properly and avoid damage then.

✓ For example, when we use the washing machine, we need to read the instructions to know how to choose the right appropriate mode for different types of clothes to clean them properly and avoid damage then.

"when we using"结构错误，应为"when we use"。"rate the instruction"用词错误，应为"read the instructions"。"instruction"应为复数形式。