机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words properly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'it took very less time', say 'it takes very little time'. Also, clarify the last part about food not getting spoiled or overheated, as it is confusing.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the microwave because it is very convenient and heats food quickly. Moreover, it helps preserve the food's taste and texture without overheating it.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases like 'stripping machines'. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'In the modern era, everyone is in a hurry, so having washing machines and sweeping machines at home is very convenient as they help keep the home clean.'

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. In today's fast-paced life, these machines save time and help maintain cleanliness at home efficiently.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'exploit the machine completely' and 'facilitate the instruction'. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because not doing so can damage the machine or cause accidents. Therefore, following the instructions carefully ensures safe and proper use.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear words like 'Balias' and 'facilitate the instructions'. Focus on clear and correct sentence construction. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, reading instructions is very important because operating a machine without them can cause damage and accidents.'

示例: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine. Otherwise, it may lead to serious damage or accidents at home.

× Moreover, it took very less time to heat the food and it doesn't get spoiled or get overheated in microwave because they're.

✓ Moreover, it takes very little time to heat the food and it doesn't get spoiled or overheated in the microwave because of that.

The verb 'took' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'takes' to match the ongoing convenience. 'Very less' is incorrect; 'very little' is the correct quantifier. 'Get overheated' should be 'overheated' without 'get' for correct passive meaning. 'They're' is unclear and replaced with 'because of that' for clarity.

× Well, yes, in modern era everyone is in hurry, so it is very convenient in homes to have washing machine and stripping machines which can easily clean homes and maintain the environment of our home very clean.

✓ Well, yes, in the modern era everyone is in a hurry, so it is very convenient in homes to have washing machines and sweeping machines which can easily clean homes and maintain the environment of our home very clean.

Missing article 'the' before 'modern era'. 'In hurry' should be 'in a hurry'. 'Washing machine and stripping machines' should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines' to match the context. 'Stripping' is a wrong word; 'sweeping' is correct for cleaning homes.

× Well, yes, I always read instructions before using any kind of machine because I believe that if uh, using a machine without reading instruction can cause hazards to machine and it can exploit the machine completely.

✓ Well, yes, I always read instructions before using any kind of machine because I believe that using a machine without reading instructions can cause hazards to the machine and it can damage the machine completely.

'If uh, using' is incorrect; 'if' is unnecessary here. 'Reading instruction' should be plural 'reading instructions'. 'Hazards to machine' needs article 'the machine'. 'Exploit the machine' is incorrect; 'damage the machine' is appropriate.

× So it is better to facilitate the instruction than when you use the machine according to the following instructions.

✓ So it is better to follow the instructions when you use the machine according to the following guidelines.

'Facilitate the instruction' is incorrect; 'follow the instructions' is correct. 'Than when' is incorrect conjunction usage; it is removed. Added 'guidelines' for clarity.

× Balias reading the instructions in very is very important to use any kind of machine because without reading the instructions if we operate the machine then it can cause serious damage to the device.

✓ Basically, reading the instructions is very important to use any kind of machine because operating the machine without reading the instructions can cause serious damage to the device.

'Balias' is a misspelling of 'Basically'. 'Reading the instructions in very is very important' is incorrect structure; corrected to 'reading the instructions is very important'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Moreover, it can cause accidents in houses. So it is efficient to facilitate the instructions then use the machine.

✓ Moreover, it can cause accidents in houses. So it is efficient to follow the instructions before using the machine.

'Facilitate the instructions' is incorrect; 'follow the instructions' is correct. 'Then use the machine' is unclear; 'before using the machine' clarifies the sequence.