机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it cleans clothes more efficiently and quickly than washing by hand.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，词汇使用不准确（如'swimming machines'应为'sweeping machines'），表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，简化句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I think washing machines are important because they save time. However, sweeping machines might not be very useful since furniture often blocks some areas, making it hard for them to clean thoroughly.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: It depends on the situation. If I have a new machine that I haven't used before, I always read the instructions carefully. But if I am familiar with the machine, I usually don't need to read them.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构有待改进，词汇使用可以更自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达。

示例: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions, especially for new machines. Without reading them carefully, you might not understand how to use the machine properly.

× if people have a good washing machine at their home, they can use them to wash their dirty clothes more clean and faster than they used their hands to wash those clothes.

✓ if people have a good washing machine at their home, they can use it to wash their dirty clothes more cleanly and faster than they use their hands to wash those clothes.

这里的主语是单数的"a good washing machine"，所以代词应使用单数"it"，而不是复数"them"。此外，"more clean"应改为副词形式"more cleanly"，因为修饰动词"wash"。

× if people have a good washing machine at their home, they can use them to wash their dirty clothes more clean and faster than they used their hands to wash those clothes.

✓ if people have a good washing machine at their home, they can use it to wash their dirty clothes more cleanly and faster than they use their hands to wash those clothes.

"more clean"应使用副词形式"more cleanly"来修饰动词"wash"，而不是形容词"clean"。

× than they used their hands to wash those clothes.

✓ than they use their hands to wash those clothes.

这里比较的是现在的动作，应使用一般现在时"use"，而不是过去时"used"。

× Well, I think washing machine is import are important, but swimming machines may be low because you know many Chinese people's furniture are very high, so it will make many places have been covered under those furnitures.

✓ Well, I think washing machines are important, but sweeping machines may be less so because you know many Chinese people's furniture is very high, so it will make many places be covered under that furniture.

"washing machine"应为复数"washing machines"，与谓语"are"保持一致。"furniture"是不可数名词，谓语应使用单数"is"，且"furnitures"错误，应为"furniture"。

× Well, I think washing machine is import are important, but swimming machines may be low because you know many Chinese people's furniture are very high, so it will make many places have been covered under those furnitures.

✓ Well, I think washing machines are important, but sweeping machines may be less so because you know many Chinese people's furniture is very high, so it will make many places be covered under that furniture.

"import"应为"important"，"low"用来形容重要性不合适，应改为"less so"或"not so important"。

× so it will make many places have been covered under those furnitures.

✓ so it will cause many places to be covered under that furniture.

"have been covered"时态不合适，应使用不定式"to be covered"。"those furnitures"错误，"furniture"不可数。

× so it will make many places have been covered under those furnitures.

✓ so it will cause many places to be covered under that furniture.

"under those furnitures"中"under"使用正确，但"furnitures"错误，应为不可数名词"furniture"。

× It should be looked in different situations.

✓ It should be looked at in different situations.

动词短语"look at"需要介词"at"，缺少导致表达不完整。

× if I just had a new machine which I hadn't used or known before, I will read the instructions as clearly as I can.

✓ if I just have a new machine which I haven't used or known before, I will read the instructions as clearly as I can.

条件句中使用一般现在时"have"，而不是过去时"had"，以符合真实条件句的时态规则。

× But if I use a machine which I was so familiar or not.

✓ But if I use a machine which I am so familiar with or not.

"was"时态不合适，应使用现在时"am"，且"familiar"后应加介词"with"。

× especially to those new machines which you hadn't used before.

✓ especially to those new machines which you haven't used before.

这里指的是过去到现在的经历，应使用现在完成时"haven't used"，而不是过去完成时"hadn't used"。

× if you cannot read the instructions very carefully, you may not know the whole using methods about this kind of machine.

✓ if you cannot read the instructions very carefully, you may not know the whole usage methods of this kind of machine.

"using methods about"表达不自然，应改为"usage methods of"，更符合英语习惯。