机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时句子结构较为简单，且表达略显重复和不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意语法准确性。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the oven because I often eat late at night. I usually take food from the fridge and use the oven to heat it quickly, which is very convenient.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但表达有些不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确性。

示例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. Moreover, during winter, they help us avoid contact with cold water, making cleaning much more convenient.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并注意单复数和介词的使用。

示例: Yes, I am a very cautious person, so I always read every line of the instructions before using a machine, even if I am familiar with it.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且结构复杂，影响表达清晰度。建议分句表达，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

示例: Yes, I think reading instructions is essential because it guarantees safety. We should carefully read every line before using any machine, even if we are familiar with it, to avoid potential accidents.

× I think I will choose my oven because I like to eat food late at night and I will always pick them from my fridge so my oven is helpful to heating the food quickly.

✓ I think I will choose my oven because I like to eat food late at night and I always pick it from my fridge, so my oven is helpful for heating the food quickly.

这里“will always pick”不符合习惯用法，表示习惯动作时应使用一般现在时“always pick”。另外，“pick them”中的“them”指代不明确，应该用单数“it”指代“food”。“helpful to heating”应改为“helpful for heating”，介词使用错误。

× my oven is helpful to heating the food quickly.

✓ my oven is helpful for heating the food quickly.

“helpful”后面应接介词“for”表示用途，而不是“to”。

× I will always pick them from my fridge

✓ I always pick it from my fridge

“food”是不可数名词，使用单数代词“it”更合适，且习惯表达中表示习惯动作用一般现在时。

× And in winter they always prevent us from come getting in touch with cold and freezing water.

✓ And in winter they always prevent us from coming into contact with cold and freezing water.

“prevent sb. from doing sth.”后应接动名词形式“coming”，而不是“come getting”。“getting in touch with”表达不准确，常用“into contact with”表示接触。

× I will read every lines of the instructions before I use them.

✓ I will read every line of the instructions before I use them.

“every”后应接单数名词，故“lines”应改为单数“line”。

× Even the machine is some kind of what I'm familiar with.

✓ Even if the machine is something I'm familiar with.

“some kind of what”结构不正确，应改为“something”。同时加上“if”构成条件状语从句，使句子完整。

× Yes, I think it's essential to read instructions because it will help you to guarantee your safety and we must make sure to read every line of the instructions carefully before using any kind of machine, even if it's something we are familiar with that will help us avoid any potential accident.

✓ Yes, I think it's essential to read instructions because it will help you guarantee your safety, and we must make sure to read every line of the instructions carefully before using any kind of machine, even if it's something we are familiar with. That will help us avoid any potential accidents.

“help you to guarantee”中“to”可省略更自然；句子过长，需分句以避免结构混乱；“accident”应使用复数形式“accidents”，表示潜在的多种事故。