机器— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
My favorite machine at my home is my laptop. Umm I use it every day for study, work and entertainment. I it really makes my life easier and helps me stay connect with others.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Of course, I think they are very important because they save a lot of time and make a housework much easier. Without them life would be more tired, especially for busy people.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Usually I do, especially when it's a new machine because I want to make sure I used it in the right way. But sometimes if the machine looks simple I just try it out first.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Of course, I think it's quite important because it help help people avoid mistakes or damage to the machine, although it keeps you safe when using something for the first time.
评估
总分
语法
× I it really makes my life easier and helps me stay connect with others.
✓ It really makes my life easier and helps me stay connected with others.
这里的 'connect' 应该用过去分词形式 'connected'，因为 'stay' 后面需要跟形容词或过去分词来表示状态。
× ...make a housework much easier.
✓ ...make housework much easier.
'housework' 是不可数名词，前面不应该加不定冠词 'a'。
× ...because I want to make sure I used it in the right way.
✓ ...because I want to make sure I use it in the right way.
这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 'use'，而不是过去时 'used'。
× ...because it help help people avoid mistakes or damage to the machine...
✓ ...because it helps people avoid mistakes or damage to the machine...
动词 'help' 需要根据主语 'it' 变为第三人称单数形式 'helps'，且重复了 'help' 一词，应删除多余的一个。
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