机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, such as 'My favorite machine at home is the refrigerator because it is very old, but it still works well. It has many different functions that make it convenient to use.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: My favorite machine at home is the refrigerator because even though it's quite old, it still works perfectly. It has several useful features that make storing food very convenient.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'. Try to clearly explain your opinion with correct grammar and linking words. For example, 'Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save people a lot of time. Moreover, studies have shown that washing machines clean clothes more effectively than hand washing.'

示例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. Additionally, research shows that washing machines clean clothes better than washing by hand.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using smoother sentences and linking words. For example, 'I always read the instructions because I believe it is necessary to use machines correctly. If you don't read them, you might miss important steps and accidentally damage the machine.'

示例: I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it properly. Otherwise, I might miss important details and accidentally break it.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps prevent mistakes and ensures machines work properly. Also, if a machine breaks, the instructions can guide you on how to fix it. Therefore, having instructions at home is essential.'

示例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because it helps avoid mistakes and keeps machines working well. Also, if a machine breaks, the instructions can show you how to repair it.

× My favourable machine in my home is refrigerator because it's very old one and even if it's old it works well and there are many different functions that makes it convenient to use.

✓ My favourite machine in my home is the refrigerator because it's a very old one, and even though it's old, it works well and there are many different functions that make it convenient to use.

The word 'favourable' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'favourite' to express preference. Also, 'refrigerator' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific item. 'Very old one' requires the article 'a' before it. 'Even if' should be 'even though' to express contrast. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'functions'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× My favourable machine in my home is refrigerator because it's very old one and even if it's old it works well and there are many different functions that makes it convenient to use.

✓ My favourite machine in my home is the refrigerator because it's a very old one, and even though it's old, it works well and there are many different functions that make it convenient to use.

The phrase 'many different functions' is correct, but the verb 'makes' does not agree with the plural noun 'functions'. The verb should be 'make' to match the plural subject. This is a quantifier-related subject-verb agreement issue.

× Yes, of course I think so because uh, they make dishes wash and sweep, so that's really safe time for people and also some researchers have shown that uh, washing machines washes properly than.

✓ Yes, of course I think so because, uh, they wash dishes and sweep, so that really saves time for people, and also some researchers have shown that, uh, washing machines wash properly.

The phrase 'make dishes wash and sweep' is incorrect; the correct form is 'they wash dishes and sweep'. 'Safe time' should be 'save time' as the verb 'save' is appropriate here. 'Washing machines washes' is incorrect because 'washing machines' is plural and requires the verb 'wash'. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× I always read instructions because I believe that reading instructions is necessary for using machine correctly.

✓ I always read the instructions because I believe that reading instructions is necessary for using a machine correctly.

The noun 'instructions' is countable and usually used with the definite article 'the' when referring to specific instructions. Also, 'using machine' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'machine' to be grammatically correct.

× For example when you can miss something.

✓ For example, when you can miss something.

A comma is needed after 'For example' to separate the introductory phrase from the rest of the sentence for clarity.

× When you don't read instruction, you can miss something and broke the machine.

✓ When you don't read the instructions, you can miss something and break the machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by the definite article 'the' because it refers to specific instructions. Also, 'broke' is past tense and should be 'break' to match the present tense context.

× When you don't read instruction, you can miss something and broke the machine.

✓ When you don't read the instructions, you can miss something and break the machine.

The verb 'broke' is past tense, but the sentence context requires the base form 'break' after 'can' to indicate possibility.

× Of course, reading instructions helps prevent mistakes and ensures everything works as it should when you Also I've already broke the machine, you can read instruction how to fix it, so it is essential to having instructions in your home to keep it.

✓ Of course, reading instructions helps prevent mistakes and ensures everything works as it should. Also, if I've already broken the machine, you can read the instructions on how to fix it, so it is essential to have instructions in your home to keep it.

The sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity. 'I've already broke' is incorrect; the past participle 'broken' is required after 'have'. 'Read instruction' should be 'read the instructions'. 'How to fix it' needs the preposition 'on'. 'Essential to having' should be 'essential to have' for correct verb form after 'essential to'.