机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for naturalness. Also, 'very less space consuming' is awkward; use 'takes up very little space' instead. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: My favourite machine at home is my coffee machine because it offers many benefits. Firstly, it saves me money since I don't have to buy coffee from cafes every day. Moreover, it takes up very little space in my kitchen, making it convenient to use.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'do wash their clothes with hands' and 'do their laundries'. Try to use more natural expressions and linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important, especially for people who work full-time. Since they have limited time, these machines help them clean their clothes and homes quickly and without much effort.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. For example, instead of repeating 'I do not know' and 'I have to look into the instructions', combine ideas using linking words for better coherence.

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because I am unfamiliar with how it works. This helps me use it correctly and avoid making mistakes.

建议: Your answer conveys the main idea but has some awkward phrasing like 'using it wrong' and 'which can do destruction'. Use more natural expressions such as 'using it incorrectly' and 'which can cause damage'. Also, try to avoid repeating 'because' consecutively.

示例: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions before using a new machine. Doing so helps us avoid using it incorrectly, which could potentially cause damage.

× It's also, uh, very less space consuming.

✓ It's also, uh, very space-saving.

The phrase 'very less space consuming' is incorrect because 'less' is not used with 'very' in this context. Instead, 'space-saving' is a more appropriate adjective to describe something that uses little space.

× They do not have enough time to do wash their clothes with hands and do sweeping, so they can easily do their laundries and cleaning and in a very little time without getting tired.

✓ They do not have enough time to wash their clothes by hand and do sweeping, so they can easily do their laundry and cleaning in very little time without getting tired.

The phrase 'do wash' is incorrect; the correct form is 'wash'. Also, 'with hands' should be 'by hand'. 'Do their laundries' is incorrect; 'laundry' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form here. 'In a very little time' should be 'in very little time' without the article 'a'.

× Yes, I do read instructions before using any machine, because if I'm getting a machine for the first time, I'm definitely new to that so I do not know beforehand how the thing works.

✓ Yes, I do read instructions before using any machine, because if I get a machine for the first time, I'm definitely new to it so I do not know beforehand how it works.

The phrase 'if I'm getting a machine' is incorrect; the simple present 'if I get' is appropriate for conditional statements. Also, 'new to that' should be 'new to it' to correctly refer to the machine. 'How the thing works' is better expressed as 'how it works' for clarity and formality.

× So I have to look into the instructions to use it properly and avoid any kind of mistake.

✓ So I have to look at the instructions to use it properly and avoid any kind of mistake.

The correct preposition with 'look' in this context is 'at' rather than 'into'. 'Look into' implies investigation, whereas 'look at' means to read or examine.

× Yes, definitely. It's really important to read the instructions before using any new machine, especially because if we do so, we can avoid any kind of damage, because when we are not familiar with the thing, we can end up using it wrong, which can do destruction.

✓ Yes, definitely. It's really important to read the instructions before using any new machine, especially because if we do so, we can avoid any kind of damage, because when we are not familiar with the machine, we can end up using it incorrectly, which can cause damage.

The phrase 'using it wrong' is incorrect; the adverb 'incorrectly' should be used. 'Do destruction' is not idiomatic; 'cause damage' is the correct expression. Also, 'the thing' is vague; 'the machine' is more precise.