机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say "My favourite machine at home is the microwave. I use it every day to heat up food, which makes it taste better."

示例: My favourite machine at home is the microwave. I use it every day to heat up food, which makes it taste better.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use correct verb forms. Also, explain your opinions with more detail. For example, "I don't find the washing machine very important because I usually eat out and don't have much laundry. As for the sweeping machine, I'm not sure what it is, but I do have a robot vacuum cleaner."

示例: I don't find the washing machine very important because I usually eat out and don't have much laundry. As for the sweeping machine, I'm not sure what it is, but I do have a robot vacuum cleaner.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I do. If you don't read the instructions, you only learn the basic functions. However, by reading them carefully, you can discover other features of the machine."

示例: Yes, I do. If you don't read the instructions, you only learn the basic functions. However, by reading them carefully, you can discover other features of the machine.

建议: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. For example, "Yes, I think it is important because instructions help you understand how the machine works and provide information in case it breaks down."

示例: Yes, I think it is important because instructions help you understand how the machine works and provide information in case it breaks down.

× My favorite machine is my home is microwave.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the microwave.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error with repeated 'is' and missing article before 'microwave'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses the definite article 'the' before 'microwave' as it refers to a specific machine in the home.

× It's make the food more delicious.

✓ It makes the food more delicious.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number and person. 'Make' is incorrect here because it does not agree with the singular subject.

× From my pile bill the washing machine is not important for me because I usually eating out so no much did to wash and the sweeping machine I'm not sure what it is about but I have a robot to.

✓ From my point of view, the washing machine is not important for me because I usually eat out, so there is not much to wash. As for the sweeping machine, I'm not sure what it is, but I have a robot vacuum.

The phrase 'From my pile bill' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'From my point of view'. 'Usually eating out' should be 'usually eat out' to match present tense. 'No much did to wash' is incorrect; it should be 'there is not much to wash'. The sentence is also run-on and unclear, so it is split and clarified. 'Sweeping machine' is better expressed as 'sweeping machine' or 'vacuum cleaner', and 'robot to' is corrected to 'robot vacuum' for clarity.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I do.

The question is in present tense 'Do you read the instructions?', so the answer should also be in present tense 'Yes, I do.' Using 'did' implies past tense, which is inconsistent with the question.

× Because if you don't read it, you just know about a simple thing that they can do.

✓ Because if you don't read it, you only know about the simple things that it can do.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Just know about a simple thing that they can do' is vague and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies that without reading, you only know simple functions of the machine.

× But if you read the instruction carefully, you're gonna find out there has the other option with your machine.

✓ But if you read the instructions carefully, you'll find out that there are other options with your machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'You're gonna' is informal; 'you'll' is more appropriate. 'There has the other option' is incorrect; it should be 'there are other options' to agree in number and use correct verb form.

× Yes, I did, because the instructions can make you more understandable how the machine work and you it will provide the information in case it is broken.

✓ Yes, I do, because the instructions can help you understand how the machine works and they provide information in case it breaks down.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should be present tense 'Yes, I do'. 'Make you more understandable' is incorrect; it should be 'help you understand'. 'How the machine work' needs subject-verb agreement: 'works'. 'You it will provide' is incorrect; 'they provide' refers to instructions. 'In case it is broken' is better expressed as 'in case it breaks down'.