机器— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
My my favorite machine in my home is the dishwasher. It helps me to clean my dishes thoroughly and it saves lots of time in my daily life. By using the machine, it, uh, helps me to concentrate on my other tasks at home.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Definitely the washing machine and the cleaning machine at home is definitely a help. So it helps me to clean my clothes very thoroughly and neatly and I can concentrate on other tasks to do so it saves lots of time so I can concentrate on my other work at home.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Yes, I do read the instructions about the machine before I operate it because, uh, it helps me to know about the machine how to operate it, rather than I operate it and I make a mistake and I renew the machine.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
It is important to read the instruction so you can efficiently operate it without making any mistakes and ruin the machine. If you don't know the instruction, you might, uh, operate it wrongly, so it can give you trouble.
评估
总分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分数: 75.0建议: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'my my' and 'uh'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific details about why the dishwasher is your favorite.
示例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it cleans my dishes thoroughly and saves me a lot of time. Consequently, I can focus on other important tasks, such as cooking or cleaning the house.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分数: 70.0建议: Avoid repeating words like 'definitely' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples of how these machines help you.
示例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they clean clothes and floors efficiently. As a result, I save time and can focus on other household chores or relax.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分数: 65.0建议: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid awkward phrasing like 'I renew the machine'.
示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it correctly. This way, I avoid making mistakes that could damage the machine.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分数: 70.0建议: Try to use plural form 'instructions' and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer explanations.
示例: Yes, reading the instructions is important because it allows you to operate the machine efficiently and avoid mistakes. Otherwise, incorrect use might cause problems or damage the machine.
语法
× Definitely the washing machine and the cleaning machine at home is definitely a help.
✓ Definitely the washing machine and the cleaning machine at home are definitely a help.
The subject consists of two singular nouns joined by 'and', which makes it plural. Therefore, the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree with the plural subject.
× It is important to read the instruction so you can efficiently operate it without making any mistakes and ruin the machine.
✓ It is important to read the instructions so you can efficiently operate it without making any mistakes and ruin the machine.
The word 'instruction' in this context should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps. Using the plural form is more natural and grammatically correct here.
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