机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，如“made nearly no noise noise”，且表达不够自然。建议注意语法时态和单复数形式，避免重复，同时丰富细节，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me clean the floor effortlessly. Moreover, it operates quietly, allowing me to rest comfortably while it works.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“address with those things at work or more valuable”，且词汇使用不准确。建议加强语法基础，使用恰当的词汇和句式，表达更具体明确。

示例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. They are efficient and can perform cleaning tasks better than humans in their specific functions.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误，如“learn how to use it rightly”，建议使用正确的词汇和语法结构，使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, of course. Learning how to use a machine correctly is the first step I should take. If I use it improperly, it might break down and cause financial loss.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“read the instructions can help”，且表达重复。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并注意语法准确性。

示例: Yes, as I mentioned earlier, reading the instructions helps us understand the machines better and learn how to operate them step by step. Otherwise, we might feel confused about the correct usage.

× Besides, it made nearly no noise noise so I can still rest in bed.

✓ Besides, it makes nearly no noise so I can still rest in bed.

这里的主语是单数的vacuum cleaner，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，而不是过去式made。

× Yes, because it can save time for us to address with those things at work or more valuable.

✓ Yes, because they can save time for us to deal with those things at work or more valuable.

这里指的是复数的washing machines and sweeping machines，谓语动词应使用复数形式can save，代词it应改为they。

× Yes, because it can save time for us to address with those things at work or more valuable.

✓ Yes, because they can save time for us to deal with those things at work or more valuable.

动词address后不应加介词with，正确搭配是deal with。

× Also these machines are convenient and efficiency, they can do better than people in the their specific area.

✓ Also these machines are convenient and efficient, they can do better than people in their specific area.

convenient和efficient都是形容词，不能用efficiency（名词）来修饰machines。

× Also these machines are convenient and efficiency, they can do better than people in the their specific area.

✓ Also these machines are convenient and efficient, they can do better than people in their specific area.

the their是重复使用定冠词，应去掉其中一个，改为their。

× Yes, of course, because learn how to use it rightly is the basic step I should take.

✓ Yes, of course, because learning how to use it correctly is the basic step I should take.

learn应改为动名词learning作主语，rightly用法不当，应改为副词correctly。

× Yes, of course, because learn how to use it rightly is the basic step I should take.

✓ Yes, of course, because learning how to use it correctly is the basic step I should take.

rightly用法不当，正确的副词是correctly，表示正确地。

× If I take the wrong action about the machine, it may break down and cause the loss of my money.

✓ If I take the wrong action with the machine, it may break down and cause the loss of my money.

动词take后应搭配介词with而不是about。

× Yes, just as I said just now, read the instructions can help us know the machines better and learn how to operate it step by step.

✓ Yes, just as I said just now, reading the instructions can help us know the machines better and learn how to operate them step by step.

read the instructions应改为动名词reading作主语，machines是复数，代词it应改为them。

× Otherwise we may feel confused about how to use it rightly.

✓ Otherwise we may feel confused about how to use it correctly.

rightly用法不当，应改为副词correctly，表示正确地。