机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant and directly addresses the question, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, adding linking words can make your answer more coherent.

示例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time. Since I bought it, I don't have to wash dishes by hand, which has encouraged me to cook more often.

建议: Your answer shows understanding but has unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes, such as 'clean and tight' and 'use them free'. To improve, use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I believe both washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential for maintaining a clean home. Although I own several of these machines, I don't use them very often because I prefer to clean manually sometimes.

建议: Your answer is honest and relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear expressions like 'sick manual'. To improve, focus on correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, try to avoid repetition and use linking words for coherence.

示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine, although I know it's important. I tend to be lazy and skip the manual, which sometimes leads to using the machine incorrectly.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors and repetition. To improve, use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating words. Adding linking words can enhance coherence.

示例: Yes, I believe it's important to read the instructions to ensure the machine works efficiently and to avoid mistakes caused by incorrect operation.

× My favorite machine in my home is the dishwasher because after I purchased the dishwasher I no longer need to wash dishes, so I the frequency that I cooked increased a lot.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the dishwasher because after I purchased the dishwasher I no longer need to wash dishes, so the frequency with which I cook has increased a lot.

The phrase 'I the frequency that I cooked increased a lot' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'the frequency with which I cook has increased a lot.' This corrects the singular/plural issue and verb tense to present perfect to indicate a change from past to present.

× I personally have several washing machine sweeping machine in my place but I don't really use them free.

✓ I personally have several washing machines and sweeping machines in my place but I don't really use them often.

The phrase 'several washing machine sweeping machine' is incorrect because 'machine' should be pluralized to 'machines' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'free' is incorrect in this context; 'often' is the appropriate adverb to express frequency.

× No, I don't really read instruction before using a machine, but I think reading instruction is quite important.

✓ No, I don't really read instructions before using a machine, but I think reading instructions is quite important.

The word 'instruction' should be pluralized to 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, the article 'the' is not necessary here.

× I should read, but just I was always too lazy to open that sick manual.

✓ I should read, but I was always too lazy to open that thick manual.

The phrase 'just I was always too lazy' is incorrect; the correct order is 'I was always too lazy.' Also, 'sick manual' is likely a typo for 'thick manual.' This correction fixes pronoun order and word choice.

× Sometimes it could cause problems like I I I used those machine in wrong way.

✓ Sometimes it could cause problems like I used those machines in the wrong way.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' because 'those' refers to multiple items. Also, 'in wrong way' needs the article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I think it's quite important to read instruction if you want to make your machine to work as efficient as possible and also to avoid any mistake you may cause with wrong wrong operation.

✓ Yes, I think it's quite important to read instructions if you want to make your machine work as efficiently as possible and also to avoid any mistakes you may cause with wrong operation.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions.' The phrase 'make your machine to work' should be 'make your machine work' without 'to.' 'Efficient' should be the adverb 'efficiently' to modify 'work.' 'Mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' to match 'any.' The repeated word 'wrong' is a typo and should be singular.