机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复词汇“it is it is”，且句子结构较简单。建议避免重复，使用更丰富的表达方式，并且可以增加一些细节来丰富内容。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the oven because I use it every morning to bake fresh bread, which is an essential part of my daily routine.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“washing and sweeping machine are”应为“machines are”，以及“not a lot of time to cleaning”应为“not a lot of time to clean”。建议注意语法正确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because many people are busy with work or study, so these machines help save time and keep the house clean efficiently.

建议: 回答中表达不够自然，如“read the instructions before using a machine is important for me”应调整语序。数字“2nd”不适合口语表达，建议用连接词替代。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and ensures my safety.

建议: 回答中存在主谓一致错误，如“help”应为“helps”，“ensure”应为“ensures”。句子结构可以更流畅，使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because it not only helps me learn how to operate the machine correctly but also ensures my safety and prevents accidents.

× Yes, I think washing and sweeping machine are all important in our daily lives because nowadays a lot of people are busy in their work or study.

✓ Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are all important in our daily lives because nowadays a lot of people are busy in their work or study.

这里的主语是复数形式（washing and sweeping machines），谓语动词也应使用复数形式are，而不是单数形式is。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

× They have not a lot of time to cleaning their house or cluttering.

✓ They do not have a lot of time to clean their house or tidy up.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形clean，而不是动名词cleaning。cluttering用法不当，应该用tidy up表示整理。

× Yes, I think read the instructions before using a machine is important for me.

✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions before using a machine is important for me.

动词作主语时应使用动名词形式reading，而不是动词原形read。

× First, I can learn how to use that and 2nd it can make sure that I can use the machine safely.

✓ First, I can learn how to use it and secondly, it can ensure that I can use the machine safely.

代词that用法不当，应使用it指代前文提到的machine。make sure搭配主语it时应改为ensure更正式。

× Yes, I think it is important to read instructions because it not only help me learn how to operate correctly and it also ensure that I can use machine safely and avoid accidents.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read instructions because it not only helps me learn how to operate correctly but also ensures that I can use the machine safely and avoid accidents.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help和ensure应加-s变为helps和ensures。连接词not only... but also结构中应使用but also而非and。machine前应加定冠词the。